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13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 06:23 PM
Hi, this is my new logo. I think i really hit it on this one, what do you think?
http://x1.putfile.com/8/21913191111.jpg
keith1
08-08-2005, 06:27 PM
Not bad, you're getting better. Here are my thoughts, I would working on the kerning, it should be tighter. Entertainment in all lowercase doesn't work and it's not aligned correctly. The flame needs work, it could be simplified. Do it in all black first. I do admit though this is miles better than that first tension logo but still not as good as my buttons.
defjoe
08-08-2005, 06:29 PM
looks like a propane tank company
chalsema
08-08-2005, 06:29 PM
It looks good. One thing I notice is that "fire" seems really pudgy. Try making it less bold? For some reason the fatness of the letters bothers me. Also, pull "entertainment" over so it lines up with "fire" more.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 06:31 PM
I'm not sure i get the pudgy thing
keith1
08-08-2005, 06:33 PM
pudgy means plump or fat.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 06:34 PM
k, this might sound dumb to u but what is kerning?
chalsema
08-08-2005, 06:40 PM
Kerning is the space between each letter.
keith1
08-08-2005, 06:42 PM
k, this might sound dumb to u but what is kerning?
No it doesn't sound dumb, I didn't know what it was until I was 75. It is the space between your letters. What program are you using?
colonel5
08-08-2005, 08:39 PM
i agree with MD... just kidding, even though that is one of my favorite reactions. I agree with the pudgy feel of the flame, the pudginess makes it look more like a clip art flower than a flame. Tightening it up a bit more would probably fix that
chalsema
08-08-2005, 08:40 PM
^^ Not even just the flame, but the whole word "fire" too.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 10:43 PM
Thanks, guys! Anyomre input?
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 10:58 PM
Here num2 I don't know, i'm kind of leaning against the kerning thing, it made it look squishy.
http://x1.putfile.com/8/21917554594.jpg
uncle carbunkle
08-08-2005, 11:00 PM
go outside and play - school will be starting again soon, and you'll hate yourself for being in front of the computer during the best years of your life when you're old and desocialized and pasty and fat and depressed.
about the logo? nope.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 11:11 PM
dude, these are the best years of my life no matter what i'm doing. this is something i really like and i might want to do the rest of my life. This is my dream, don't try to stear me away. as for getting away from the computer, i'm only on about 2 hours a day. I deliver the neighborhoods newspapers, I take bike rides, go swimming, and have a tree house. Computers are my side hobby(even though their going to be my future).
Old guy chear up- Hey, just think about it, the best years of your life might still be ahead of you. who knows? you could have the greatest moments of your life from here on. Don't act depressed, get up, do something that would have an impact on this world. :o thankyou.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 11:15 PM
oh yeah, and don't steal my threads, Please give more input, everybody.
morea
08-08-2005, 11:20 PM
go outside and play - school will be starting again soon, and you'll hate yourself for being in front of the computer during the best years of your life when you're old and desocialized and pasty and fat and depressed.
This is very, VERY true.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 11:24 PM
but, morea these thing are true for everbody. no matter what age, things don't have to be the best when you are young you can have the best time of your life when your 102. maybe everyone should take this quote how it is, except the school part.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 11:26 PM
I feel sorry for uncle carbunkle. He should have a better outlook on life.
13yrGuru
08-08-2005, 11:28 PM
Here num2 I don't know, i'm kind of leaning against the kerning thing, it made it look squishy.
http://x1.putfile.com/8/21917554594.jpg
Alright, back to the subject.
keith1
08-08-2005, 11:31 PM
Well Carbuncle is pushing 90 as I am but has had very a hard life juggling the Grizzly Adams lifestyle while pursuing a career in graphic design. Ease up on him 13yrGuru. Sorry all can't be young like you, you don't have to rub it in. We were once able to ride bikes and climb trees too.
13yrGuru
08-09-2005, 12:12 AM
hey, i'm sorry if you thought that i was "rubbing it in". But it gets to me when i see the elderly just mopeing around waiting for their life to end. I want everyone to see that you can still have the greatest times when you are very, very, old. Make the best of the times ahead of you. don't look back at what you have done wrong, or that you used to have. Create new memories. I'm very sorry if i said those last statements in the wrong way, will you forgive me. oh, and by the way. I now beleive your 87.
morea
08-09-2005, 12:21 AM
13yr, check out uncle carbuncle's photo in the Names to Faces (http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=28) thread, ok?
13yrGuru
08-09-2005, 12:23 AM
ok, sure
D-Zine
08-09-2005, 12:28 AM
Keith and Unc are old but they do have greatd hearts and good spirit. Don't be too hard on them youngling ;)
as for the kerning...when its too far spaced sometimes it becomes hard to read and with a logo - readability is something you really should have.
uncle carbunkle
08-09-2005, 03:29 PM
oh yeah, and don't steal my threads, Please give more input, everybody.
http://www.pfaffusa.com/amc/images/209%20thread.jpg
now i have ALL the thread. :D
D-Zine
08-09-2005, 03:52 PM
ROFL!!!
Nice nice threads unc! You da *man* ;) lol
smashmiester
08-10-2005, 06:26 AM
13yr, check out uncle carbuncle's photo in the Names to Faces (http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=28) thread, ok?
I found uncle carbuncle's picture in there. Does Keith1 have one in there too that I am missing?
I must say that I find the sparring between Keith1 and 13yrGuru very amusing. :D
Way to teach those youngn's a lesson old man ;)