Taking a break on a business card

[JaCkinbOx]

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Hi, guys. I'm taking a break designing this business card. Feel free to be brutal critics with this one, save for the logo. That part isn't going to change in any significant way.

I'm very open-minded to ideas for this, as I'm in the middle of correcting the composition.

[dreamsofdali]

Well the type is a little difficult to read for me. Either keep it white lettering or make it skewed black lettering (I'm kind of digging the black lettering more). Maybe screw around with the baseline so it looks a bit more organic instead of on a straight line as well.