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[D-Frag]

so yeah, you know those vending machines you put a quarter in and they fill up a gallon of water for you. well im doing a backlit sign for a company, the thing is, if they like it, this will be up at every grocery store in town, great exposure.

so, tell me, what do you think? I might take a pic of there old one and post it that way you can see the difference. at least its an easy concept, only having to focus on the word "water"

rip it to shreds everyone.....

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5878/waterbacklitproof9wi.jpg

[plasticboy]

HUGE , resize and post again, so people will be able to give a crit for the piece

[EC]

holy huge ass image batman! Sorry I can't afford a larger monitor. ;)

Looks good so far though.

[cjoe]

i'm not convinced about the typeface. i don't like the transition from your gradient to the picture of the bubbles, it just seems too sudden. The line it creates is just distracting, and it doesn't give a harmonious feel. I suggest doing something with that line. Change fonts for each word: clean, refreshing and delicious.

[LeeIs]

Also, I would drop the bottom part all together and have the bubbles fill out the whole piece. The reflection part doesn't do anything for this IMO. I like the bubbles though, kinda generic but so is water ;) and plus you wanna draw attention to their box in which case the blue bubbles will work very well. so the bubbles must stay!

Also resize the original, If I hate one thing on da iinternet, it is horizantal scrolling.

[red raw]

Don't Resize it, I LIKE IT BIIIIIiiiiiIIIIIG!

Nice Design D-Frag. I'd be careful with the Capital D. It can look like a P for just a second. I know it's a small thing but when I think of water, i don't want to think of P :)

[red raw]

It remind me of this though...
good or bad, i dunno ?!?!

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/949/iceagedvdcoverklein6pa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)