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defeat
11-08-2005, 09:11 AM
Body: Please take a look at this site – http://www.concept-vision.com.ua
There u’ll find portfolio section – please take a look and say whatever u think.
Critique of the site’s design will be appreciated also.
Especially I really want to know what u think about conept-art section, that u can find there.
Thanks for your attention.
colonel5
11-08-2005, 01:12 PM
1st and foremost I'd suggest not using Instant Message talk, ya know actually spell out U? also you could increase the quality of the French, English... buttons, they're kinda fuzzy, and the font in the upper right hand corner of the pages doesn't match the rest of the page... also use something else besides blue underlined text for the links to the sections of your portfolio...
Satchel
11-08-2005, 01:19 PM
I like the surfer and climbing guy side bar thing - looks good... but yeah the different language buttons are fuzzy...
Drorain
11-08-2005, 02:02 PM
defeat the site looks like a nice clean layout, and the color scheme is fine, you'll need to reslice and resave the whole site though because a certain fuzziness is coming through on every graphic. This grainyness shows up because you went for the near lowest file size possible, but it took away the quality of the image. You dont have to worry AS much as you are on file size, kick the quality up a bit when you are saving each slice for the web. You also have a couple misplaced pixels in the "about us" part, a couple lone red and white pixels that shouldnt be there.
matbiskit
11-08-2005, 03:52 PM
The text on the home page is nowhere near proper English. If it is your second language, that's ok, but you should get someone to clean it up for you. Also, it seems as if the first thing you are saying is "we're expensive". Probably not the best first impression to make.
Jimeda Fork
11-08-2005, 03:55 PM
Your time costs a lot. Our services not cheap as well.
I didn't get past that. I wouldn't open anything with that type of statement.
steve-o
11-08-2005, 04:25 PM
That's nothing. Check out the English version of this site:
http://www.restaurant-rotonde.com/category/fc236c686a869dd2e9bc65cd87c21421.
Jason Fraker
11-08-2005, 04:28 PM
^^ What he said. That's a tad rude, don't you think? Plus, anyone who's ever hired a designer knows that we're not cheap (unless they hired 13yrguru). I'd leave that off completely
GreenThumb
11-08-2005, 07:53 PM
I take the 5th
jlknauff
11-08-2005, 07:59 PM
The logo looks like the adavair dispenser (I think that's what it was...the little purple asthma thing?).
Overall bad design, and even worse copy. Basically, hey, I'm expensive, you're expensive, let's all go charge a lot of money :eek: My favorite part of the website is internet explorer's back button.
Now, that wasn't the slightest bit constructive :rolleyes:
Mynock
11-08-2005, 08:05 PM
u’llInteresting contraction.
TheBluePanda
11-08-2005, 08:07 PM
While the broken English and usage of "u" instead of "you" are amusing, I don't see how you are going to get any English-speaking clients. Work on the grammar.
danedawg99
11-08-2005, 08:10 PM
Your time costs a lot. Our services not cheap as well.
THIS is going on my business cards. :D ;)
plasticboy
11-08-2005, 08:59 PM
You still need to wrok a lot on the content of the site. While English isn't used properly, russian articles remind me of an announcement hanged on the door of a third-class grocery store somewhere in Kaluga.
"Нашими преимуществами являются:
молодость команды, что позволяет нам быстрее совершенствоваться, минуя штампы прошлого и стремясь только вперед;
перспективность выбранной тематики - ведь искусство всегда в цене, а Интернет-бизнес продолжает развиваться;
работа на результат;
качество изготавливаемого продукта."
Here is a good link for you : http://www.nzcal.com/hp/adk/
plasticboy
11-08-2005, 09:07 PM
Yeah, put descriptions for your works .
defeat
11-09-2005, 07:37 AM
yeah, guys, that's right Engilsh - is my second language. I'm going to change some words and spellings, and introduction on the site.
I agree that quiality of the images is not the best. I'll recode. It will be done today and u can check it for changes
LeeIs
11-09-2005, 08:17 AM
I'll add this to what everyone else has said.
1. don't use jpg for your navigation items, try .gif they'll look better and will be smaller in size.
2. Don't use "stuff" as in "advertising stuff". it just sounds bad.
3. your character drawings and renditions are excellent.
4. I like your logos also.
5. your "photo art" section seems to open something like an interior design sketch/rendering section. You might wanna name it appropriately.
6. Maybe polygraphy should be advertising material or something like that.
7. Lots of spelling errors. "out team" when it should be "our team". Also you're using that line a bit too much. Of coarse everything is done by you guys, I don't think you should repeat it that much.