company holiday card

[colonel5]

here's draft 1 of our company's holiday card... let me know what you think... i'm not at all content with the "wishes you a" part. the actual size is 5x7.5

[colonel5]

btw, the top (upside down part) is the back and the bottom is the front

[EC]

I don't think it makes sense gramatically, being that "holidays" is plural. The image is lovely though! :)

[colonel5]

any suggestions of what would work, it was copy and pasted from my boss' email, didn't bother to read it through...

[vtwin_gary]

i agree it should be iot wishes you a happy holiday or
iot wishes you happy holidays

it may also be hard to get a perfect score & fold you may want to consider moving the snow to the other side on one side or the other.

[colonel5]

"wishes you happy holidays"? that makes it correct but still sounds funny

[vtwin_gary]

maybe just happy holidays from iot

[vtwin_gary]

is there going to be anything on the inside of the card?

[Satchel]

how about ...wishes you a happy holiday

I also am not fond on the internationalofficetechnologies part but I assume that's required to be like that.

[Mynock]

For one, there are no African animals anywhere in your design. Come on. Looks nice. Too bad you can't scrap and redesign your company's logo. You could make it smaller. It might look better smaller, more white...err...red space.

[danedawg99]

"wishing you happy holidays"

"Wishes you a happy holiday"

"Happy holidays, wish you, hmmm?" ;)

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[TheBluePanda]

I'd go with "We's wishes you teh happyest xmas!"

[vtwin_gary]

outside:
tis the season to air your grievances...
FESTIVUS
the Holiday for the rest of us!

Inside:
The pole is up
grievences born
with feats of strength.
my ligaments are torn.

Happy Festivus!

[EC]

Wishes you a happy holiday season?

Or just "happy holidays from ..."

[EC]

Happy holiday wishes from ...

[colonel5]

I also am not fond on the internationalofficetechnologies part but I assume that's required to be like that.[/QUOTE}

[QUOTE=Mynock]For one, there are no African animals anywhere in your design. Come on. Looks nice. Too bad you can't scrap and redesign your company's logo. You could make it smaller. It might look better smaller, more white...err...red space.

yeah the logo was in the process of being designed by a freelancer when i was hired on... so i work with what they give me ;o)

[Mynock]

I think you are missing a tag in there.

[Mynock]

The blow is a nice touch I like it.

[EC]

The blow is a nice touch I like it.

lol

[jimking]

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

[flutterby nut]

How about: Wishing you a Joyous Holiday Season, International Office Technologies?
put the iot on the bottom as a signature...just a thought

[G-Man79]

You could also go with:

"Seasons Greetings from IOT"

generic but covers just about everyone. I dig the card though, nicely done!

[colonel5]

well my boss now wants to go with just "Merry Christmas" and then the IOT at the bottom... I asked him why he didn't want to do "Happy Holidays" and he said "Cause we celebrate Christmas..." which I also celebrate, but i don't know that we want to alienate our clients that might not

[EC]

Yeah, I'm never comfortable doing that either. But oh well, hims the boss.

[Mynock]

Basically it's one thing or another. We had happy holidays on ours last year, but we put santa on the front. Almost at 10k EC. woot woot

[PersonasBinar]

We wish you the best of luck surving the upcoming corporate TipOtheHat to greed and mass marketing everywhere. May your board of Directors not get sent to jail until you have cashed out.

[EC]

not quite 10k, but 1k is coming up. Partay.

What do I win morea?

[EC]

We wish you the best of luck surving the upcoming corporate TipOtheHat to greed and mass marketing everywhere. May your board of Directors not get sent to jail until you have cashed out.

Now that's a christmas greeting.

[PersonasBinar]

Year end ,darling, year end. lol