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solcjoye
06-12-2004, 02:24 AM
Opinions, critiques, etc.
As usual, my little warning Im not a website producer, so I do the best I can with Dreamweaver and some hand coding, Im sure the code is garbage looking, help me out with that if you can, also there are a couple little things that need tweaking mainly the slide show images are a bit messy still, and the pop-up example work is a bit messy still...
Other than that, let loose, and thanks!
-S.
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Post Edited (solcjoye) : 6/12/2004 3:41:53 PM GMT
3howards
06-12-2004, 10:22 PM
i really like the direction you took with this site. gives it a handcrafted feel, which obviously works well because that's what the site is about, hand-crafted invitations ...
at first, i tried to click on the d-o-p images because the site layout implied menu links there. most vertical layouts have the menu at the top.
mainly i like the the color scheme and usage of graphics to communicate your message. the site really showcases the product. great site .... two thumbs up!
I like it a lot. I have to warn you that the word 'Copyrighted' appears on the same line as the links at the bottom when viewed with Mozzilla. It might require a hard return.
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solcjoye
06-14-2004, 09:22 PM
Thanks! Im assuming when you say 'hard return' youre talking about forcing it to go down a line from the rest of the text, not sure how to do that but Im sure I can find out.. thanks, does everything else look/run alright in Mozilla? The popups, slideshow etc.? Thanks!
-S.
Ryan8720
06-14-2004, 10:56 PM
Everything looks fine in Mozilla for me.
If you want to put in a hard return, but a br tag in from of Copyrighted.
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Big Perm-dizzle
06-14-2004, 11:25 PM
drop the pixel size on the bottom links....maybe take off the bold add some spaces between the :: and the links
they draw my eyes to much...
other than that....looks good
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Benjamin
06-15-2004, 05:14 AM
Overall very nice style. Looks good.
Fade out the 'copyright' line of text - make it gray instead of black and not bold, and possibly shink the text size. The black text makes this line far too prominant. Perhaps a copyright symbol would be good? As Perm says, put spaces between the :: and links.
The useful links page, the ads really jar with your colour scheme. Can you find a way around it?
Example work: a bit more space above + below examples?
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