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ForeverZ
12-29-2005, 03:44 AM
I redid my website. I made it more graphic like. I know the text needs to be closer away from side, havent figured out how to do that yet. But as a whole is this more professional. Next i will be working on a portfolio website for my designs.

http://www.galacticchaos.net

jlknauff
12-29-2005, 04:14 PM
I think it would be great if this was 1994 and you were a soccer mom...but for a designer, I think it needs a lot of work.

colonel5
12-29-2005, 05:05 PM
get rid of the borders on the table, try different fonts & colors, the black headlines don't pop very well with the bg color. just a start...

ForeverZ
12-30-2005, 12:29 AM
Ok last time i redo it. This is my final one, i would still like feddback on it. I thank you all for your opinions.

Piscosour
12-30-2005, 05:36 PM
Sorry man, it doesn't look any better!.

JPnyc
12-30-2005, 05:41 PM
What's so terrible about it?

Navian
12-30-2005, 05:49 PM
I dont know what is wrong with the site. It looks fine to me. maybe on the "dowload" page, you could reduce the size of the font.

morea
12-30-2005, 05:51 PM
the navigation works well, and the site seems to be pretty thorough.

I did have a hard time reading some of the text where it overlapped the graphics, or the blue text on the FAQ page (where it says "FAQ section" and "FAQ List"). I do like the font size and color you used on that page otherwise, it was straightforward and easy to read.

I'd like to see more consistency in the font style and size from page to page. If you could make it all match that FAQ page, I think it would be more "user friendly".

I noticed a couple of typos on the first page, as follows:
enemys should be enemies and Nuetral should be Neutral.

I think it's a pretty good start. ;)

tZ
12-30-2005, 06:01 PM
Its not the worst thing I have ever seen or anything... but there is much room for improvement.

If your satisifed then i'll work.

I can read the text and your navigation functions... so it works.

As piscosour addressed its not the most sucesfull piece of design to date, but I doubt that was your intitial intentions.

As morea said... its a good start.

Regardless of whether you yourself find it done or not.

It is a improvement from the origional(if I rmember correctly).

One thing that did arise that could highly help yousites presense it the fact that your layout is fighting to be either open or isolated.

In that you site is within an isolated container up on the top right.

generally when sites are designed as isolations it is best to place them in the center rather then up at the top corner.

Then if you do move ot onto the center maybe even defining that isolation through line would help with the layout.

So it looks as if the site is in deed isolated rather then somewhat isolated and somewhat not- like it is now.

Thats is something you should easily be able to fix.

On the topic of pushing it more.... if you knew what you were doing(from a design aspect)... there is alot of things I see that could be done to further help the sucess.

Because I like the overall feel you have created and how you have done it.... just technical and design decisions are holding your site back.

Such little things as where the copyright shoudla ctually be placed.... or thr padding on your menu.... very little things.

I didn't mean that as an insult... just saying

hope it helps.