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e-layout.com
02-20-2006, 02:46 PM
On this page several layouts of trekking guide cover -- Cover design (http://www.e-layout.com/uk/cover.html).
Critique, please!
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e-layout.com
02-20-2006, 03:06 PM
Thanks! Error in link fixed!
I think I'd prefer to see the bottom photo used in the top layout, only because it communicates "trekking" better (at least in my mind). But the black bar gives it a little visual interest and for some reason just says "GUIDE" to me.
But keep in mind where these will be placed -- magazine racks, etc. The title in the top version seems VERY low if these are going to be sitting on a brochure/magazine type rack.
So what I'm getting at -- pull the bottom photo up to the top layout and pull the black bar and title up so it occupies a smaller space toward the top.
Does that make sense? No coffee yet for me, sorry.
chazdecker
02-20-2006, 06:33 PM
The images seem to be a bit under-saturated. Perhaps a new more vibrant image would help liven up the cover some.
i like em. Geez we're having a run of good designs being submitted.
e-layout.com
02-21-2006, 10:55 PM
I think I'd prefer to see the bottom photo used in the top layout, only because it communicates "trekking" better (at least in my mind).
I like bottom photo, too.
So what I'm getting at -- pull the bottom photo up to the top layout and pull the black bar and title up so it occupies a smaller space toward the top.
Ok. I'll try. It's may be intresting!
The images seem to be a bit under-saturated.
I agree. Top image is not well enoght.
Thanks All for advices! I start to work on new versiion of design.