Love me Darlin'

[Manga Sprai]

http://spraistudio.qualysearch.com/loveme.jpg
i think i ll use this for a t-shirt.
do u like it?

[biosensor]

i like it,,,ny wife wuld wear it... :)

[D-Frag]

I do like it but some of the curves could be cleaned up a bit, especially the black line that connects the top illustration to the lower case "M", needs some cleaning, but i like it none the less

[morea]

I think it's a nice concept, but the choppiness in the type is really throwing my eye off. The breaks in the "m", "e", and "i", "in" really spoil the effect, imo.

You might want to play around a bit with the decorative lines, too. Maybe add some variation in thickness, etc.

Keep at it. Like I said, it's a nice idea, but it just doesn't look "finished" to me.

[Manga Sprai]

yeah thanks, i didnt find a more regoular font.. maybe i ll rough a bit the decorative lines...make linear the font is not so simple..

[PrintDriver]

The way the font isn't working makes spots appear in my vision while looking at it. That's a font that needs to go away.

That said, be careful of your tail joins. While you have the kerning right, this particular font would need a lot of cleanup work to make it flow naturally. You might be better off using it as an undertemplate and using a brushed stroke to make something of it freehand. The idea of using a less formal, less regular font is good, just not that one. Please?

[Manga Sprai]

!!
i could use it as a template!i didnt think that!
maybe i ll make another similiar work using a similiar font as template..
.do you suggest any font?