Wich Buisness Card looks better

[monstar-x]

Hello,

Guys, wich buisnesscard look better and more Pro.
http://www.probe3.de/downloads/vcards.jpg

i am open for criticism and proposal.

Thank you

[designpunk]

bit too much going on in both of em for me. Top one better though

[mac.FINN]

Personally I like the second one better... not sure why, just looks cleaner. nice.

[Jeizzavelle]

I like the second one better but something about it is bothering me...the background spots maybe?

[DesignerScott]

#2 !
Hate the third color in the first one for some reason, and I've never been a fan of the wave, in design or at baseball games.

[emmerse]

Short answer: #2

Long answer: #2

:)

[vtwin_gary]

well i guess i'll go against the grain here cause i think #1 is better.
I think #2 would get lost in a crowd, not that 1 is great just a little more unique.

[Mynock]

I also like the first one, more dynamic.

[ecsyle]

Are you using an off size for the card? If it doesn't fit in my wallet with the other cards, or my rolodex, then I would probably just throw it away.

[balou]

I'll take #2 with curly fries.

[monstar-x]

Thanks for the existing answers.
please more ;)

[monstar-x]

Are you using an off size for the card? If it doesn't fit in my wallet with the other cards, or my rolodex, then I would probably just throw it away.

Not really i used 87mm x 57mm , on each side -1mm Cutlines also, 85mmx55mm ist standard.

[cjoe]

can i say none? really i can't choose between the two.

[cmar]

I like #1
it flows, has direction, movment, draws me in to read the content.

#2 looks has the square formal look that is great if you want to blend in to the crowd.
it is comfortable, safe, but boring

[typographics]

im with cjoe on this one. i think they both need some serious revisions.

[monstar-x]

im with cjoe on this one. i think they both need some serious revisions.

hmm, tell me why issent serious for you?
Thank you for answer.


NEW CARDS

http://www.probe3.de/downloads/vcards_2.jpg

Is this better?

The quote on card means: Who stops to recruit, in order to save money, can likewise its clock stop, in order to save time.
or else, sorry my english issent the best :-)

[cjoe]

what font is that you are using? It is not working. Loose the quote. Loose the central alignment. Why is the Logo on the front with logotype, but the logo on the has no logotype?
That font is terrible.

[monstar-x]

what font is that you are using? It is not working. Loose the quote. Loose the central alignment. Why is the Logo on the front with logotype, but the logo on the has no logotype?
That font is terrible.

thanks for criticism.
I will change the font and look how looks.
Thank you :cool: