Swanky birthday invite!

[Alex Traska]

Some friends of mine are throwing a huge birthday party and asked me to do them a flyer for them as an invitation...Would love any comments. :)

http://www.myhouse-yourhouse.net/flyers/other/traceyinvite.jpg

[EC]

I love.

[balou]

Since Paris Hilton has denounced her old phrase of "That's Hot", I'll use her new one, "That's Sexy". Lovely! Space between Pizza and Hut and it would be perfect. Oh, and the flower - what would it look like with the other two petals in black - or to show the dividing line of blue to black under the top and bottom petals rather than filling them black?

[Alex Traska]

thanks. Yea i'd thought about the petals myself.

I've just updated the image. Tweaked loads of the curves, nudged some stuff around, changed the left hand twirls over the blue from white to black, put a space in Pizza Hut (thanks!) and vertically centered the whole flower design better in the space it sits in.

[balou]

Did you do the illustration?

[balou]

Oooh! I like that better!

[AlexNJ210]

galileoooo galileo fiagro!!! to balou's signature;)

[Alex Traska]

balou: yes i did.

[balou]

galileoooo galileo fiagro!!! to balou's signature;)

hehe! It's hard to not finish it isn't it!

edit: Ouch, that was like the worst sentence ever.

[balou]

balou: yes i did.

Very nice! If your friends don't notice the details, it is appreciated here!

[morea]

well done!

[AlexNJ210]

yeah, nice job alex. Looks really cool

[tZ]

nice job

My only concern is how close the body copy is to the "alex traska and pee".

Other then that very nice stuff.

[Alex Traska]

nice job

My only concern is how close the body copy is to the "alex traska and pee".

Other then that very nice stuff.

peej.

yea i thought that but now i've printed it, it looks fine.

[mac.FINN]

LOL! Please welcome to the stage an up and coming talent DJ URINE!!!

j/k Jz... nice typo though :D