spirit!! which one - sorta NSFW

[@blacc]

pick which one u like the best

these r a6 flyers for a house and garage rave in londonhttp://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5163/spiritfront8zp.jpghttp://img462.imageshack.us/img462/5128/spirit24iu.jpg

[Jeizzavelle]

I like the top one. Reminds me more of a rave atmosphere. Awesome work!

[balou]

Bottom one looks like a strip joint. Should add CNSFW (content not safe for work) to the title of this thread in case someone pulls this up and boss walks by.

[morea]

I did. Sorry. Carry on.

[@blacc]

thkz did'nt think

[morea]

no worries. I like the feel of the first one better, too.

[Tyger]

I like 'em both but I think the first one is more effective.

Nicely done, these good looking flyers

[Elrod]

Hey, nice work.....my graphic side says #1..that just hangs together well...the sicko in me like #2...body parts always get a second look.

#1...Will be great in my opnion.

[reuber1]

Honestly, I like #2 better, and not just because of the boob. I still think #1 is awesome, but I think #2 suits the rave environment better. Then again, I never go to raves, I just see them on TV and such. Honestly, I think either one would be good, but I lean towards the second. I don't know if anybody over the pond gets offended by exposed mammaries as much as people do here in the US, but if not I'd say go with it.

[@blacc]

someone said i should get rid of the eyelets in the corner of the flyer any views on this

[reuber1]

Actually, yeah, I wasn't sure what those were all about. I think it wouldn't hurt to get rid of them.

[@blacc]

ok ill try it

[typographics]

i really like the second one. the way the circles merge with the girls arm and garment. very slick. i also like boobies, so thats a plus also. i dont like the 'spirit of house' type. doesnt fit with the rest of the design. it becomes a seperate element that doesnt relate.

[Kool]

It's a really nice boob too..... Yep the boob version takes it.

[cjoe]

i really want to say the boob version, but i think the first one werks better.

[captain spanky]

I'm with cjoe... i also like boobs but i think the first one is the better flyer. In my mind it's a stronger image and has more to do with the club scene than the second... :)

[kerrysmagicshirt]

i like the second better - imho the first is too much, the second is much simpler - though most girlies won't like it. cover up her nip with a spiral or something. The second i think has a lot more class.

[@blacc]

need to know whats wrong with the image besides the typography someone stated that there needs 2 b more room at the top (image to near the edge) is there any other things u can spot that need tending to

[emmerse]

I like the swirls on #2, but #1 works better for "spirit" of house.

my only complaints are the eyelets... lose them. and I'm not digging the logo treatment at all. The kerning is a bit much for the font type. I really like the image, but the logo at the bottom needs a lot of work. unless it was supplied, then I guess you have to leave as is.

[shadepics]

First one definately. The eyelets don't really seem to do anything for the design so i'd try taking them off. Love the colour in the first one. Nice work

[distruktor]

its the first one for me.

On both the logos though there is a thin black line around the angel sitting on the letters... i'd maybe clean that up.

dis.

:edit: shouldnt there be information on them if they are flyers? or is it on the back?

[erichmond]

Personally I will be going to the second rave..... oo ah oo ah oo ah, boxes, boxes, boxes.....

[@blacc]

it is the norm to place the info on the front which most promoters adhere to but with gentle persuasion i convinced them to put all the info on the back.

leaving the image to attract the punter and curiosity to make them find out what it's about