confused?

[plantationfarmer]

hello.
i would really like some comments on my works.
i'm industrial design trained, but thinking of crossing to graphics and stuff..
here's a few.

http://a4.cpimg.com/image/30/D0/35805744-1bc0-01F401F4-.jpg
http://a6.cpimg.com/image/E2/93/34986466-65f4-0226019E-.jpg

thanks!






:i sell high quality sweet coconuts:

[John G]

Looks pretty cool. I like the first one, but I'm a bit confused I must say by the second. As a logo it's pretty cool, but as a series I'm not sure I get it. The only qualm about the first one is just that the cloud structure and the flow of it's lines doesn't sit well with me when it is compared to the rest. Otherwise I really enjoy the vector work, gradients, and odd shapes.

Keep up the good work.

--John

http://www-personal.ksu.edu/~john/
http://gordo663.deviantart.com/gallery/

[ylaenna]

Veli intelesting. I like 'em both. Not to say I get it either, but I like 'em.

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[ylaenna]

Oh, but I like your avatar the most. hehe

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[plantationfarmer]

dont really have a direction really..
the 1st is just bullsh!tting.
the 2nd image is a tee design for myself.
yup.

:i sell high quality sweet coconuts:

[snypa]

i really like the second one. great use of our new american mascot.
got one in a large? i like em a little baggy.

I'm not a real graphic designer, but I do play one on tv