Which Ad looks best?

[Rich M]

Hey, I'm starting to custom build PC's and plan on posting an ad on bulletin boards locally. Which one would attract the most attention?

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo8-2.jpg

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo8.jpg

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo7.jpg

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo3.jpg

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo640x480.jpg

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo5.jpg

http://users.rcn.com/rmautino/Logo_2_800.jpg

Post Edited (Rich M) : 7/5/2004 6:36:19 PM GMT

[Benjamin]

I prefer the layout of the top one although in a way it could be good to have the photo of the computer larger and clearer. The waterfall leads your eye to the computer. Looks like a nice machine!

The logo is good. Perhaps you should line up the 'S' of 'Systems' with the big 'S'? You could try making the logo colour a bit lighter so it stands out more?

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[Rich M]

Update.

[ylaenna]

I definitely like the last one most. I'd change the outer glow on the machine to something other than the default yellow that outer glow comes in. Pick a color already in your ad, like white or that grey-blue, or maybe even that maroon color of the logo. Experiment and see which color you think looks best but I think I'd pick the grey blue myself. Also, try increasing the blur on the outer glow a little. The way it is now is too much of an outline - looks like when someone does a bad masking job with a green screen. ;)

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[Rich M]

Thanks, made an update and added three more pics.