dog kennel site

[Big Perm-dizzle]

www.twosmalldogs.com/clientpreviews/golden/golden/index.html (http://www.twosmalldogs.com/clientpreviews/golden/golden/index.html)

this is a work in progress....to me its a little left heavy

watch think....none of the links work

thanks

"In the past couple of weeks your kids have touched me, and i'm pretty sure i've touched them too" - Jack Black (School of Rock)

[Ryan8720]

You have a thing for dogs don't you? lol

Looks good, but you are right, it is left heavy.

Your code is getting much better. You don't need the trailing / on emptly elements unless you are using XHTML though. And I don't see why you need all those #160 things in there.

http://edgewebdesign.org/ryan2.gif (http://www.edgewebdesign.org)

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[Big Perm-dizzle]

i think the clean up in DW did that...source formating applied is what the program said it needed....

i run everything thru HTML TIDY now...i know I need alt tags etc...

I traded this guy a golden retriever for a web site....the dog is microchipped and akc registried too....

www.branchwedding.sdmhost.com/murphy/index.html (http://www.branchwedding.sdmhost.com/murphy/index.html)

he sells dogs for $850 plus $225 for shipping plus around $250 for the microchip.....not to bad of a deal....

I do love dogs.....

"In the past couple of weeks your kids have touched me, and i'm pretty sure i've touched them too" - Jack Black (School of Rock)

[D-Zine]

I obviously dunno anything about coding and stuff...hehe... but as far as the layout..it looks good, The site is clean, looks nice Perm! It does looks a lil heavy. There is just too much copy. If it is necessary for all of it to be on the main page, then I think it needs to be broken up somehow.

The main thing that bothers me with the copy is that it is too close to the images on the left. I think you need to define more space in there. When I see that much copy it just tends to run all together and I don't wanna read it.

Also, the images on the left don't have an equal amount of white space between them. That may be a picky thing but I spend about 85% of my time doing layout so I notice all that stuff I guess :o) Maybe just nudge em some to even the white space out.

I like your header and your color choices. I wouldn't change any of that except the white line after where is says "Golden Heaven" (but I am thinking that isn't suppose to be there anyways). That's it...my main suggestion is just try to break up some of that copy and increase the space a lil so its not so close to the pics. Nice work..post yer updates!

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http://coastalcarousel.com/GDF/metatag3.jpg

Who says doodling isn't constructive?!

[Madora]

Puppies!!! I am unable to give any kind of a good critque, as I am distracted by the puppies! ;)

"Who am I? Where did I come from? Who are these demons, and why do they relentlessly cross my path?"

[Big Perm-dizzle]

thats what I was trying to do....hahahaha

"In the past couple of weeks your kids have touched me, and i'm pretty sure i've touched them too" - Jack Black (School of Rock)