Could do with a little bit of advice

[herman]

Hiya,

I hope this doesn't get classed as Free Work post, cos I'm just asking for advice & direction. If it's in the wrong folder just say :)

Anyway, I've been tasked with desiging some business cards for my company (There's a laugh for a start) - now I have a fair amount of know how but not too much graphical direction :D

What I have so far is all here: http://www.integral-systems.org/bus/bus2.jpg

Now, I think the majority of it is alright apart from the "Systems" bit - I just can't think how to make it blend. If anyone could offer some direction and advice on this (And the rest, naturally) then I'd bemost appreciative :)

Thanks

Daniel Herman

[defjoe]

works for me. I like you choice of color. A always liked orange cause it's different and when used right it can looks good.

oh and this should be in the showcase...but i'm sure the mod for this section will move it for you.

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[herman]

Thanks for the support- and if a mod could move it that'd be cool.

[style]

its really good.. but the word systems isnt so clear.. at least on my screen.. maybe it prints better?

http://myweb.tiscali.co.uk/instyle/sigi.jpg

[herman]

It does seem to print okay, in as much as readability but it just looks.....wrong atm.

Any ideas?

[ylaenna]

I think it works really well - clean, simple, effective. I think the 'T' needs to be lowercase in 'The' though.

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[estazor]

I like it a lot and the use of orange I love mainly since I love using warm colors. The only that bothers me and it could just be me is that when I read the word Integral the 'tegra' feels wierd to me. I think its the pixelated type look it has with so many corners close together that bother me. Then again since this a bussiness card it may look better or maybe worse but that is what bothers me. Again it could just be me being wierd.

[Benjamin]

Kerning around letter 'g' needs adjusting

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[herman]

http://www.integral-systems.org/bus/bus4.jpg

Slightly different design for the logo - thoughts?

[estazor]

What if you changed the font for 'systems' in the first design with just a normal sans serif font but still kept the pixel looking integrated? It is just a thought though I am not sure exactly if that would look good or not.

[marthend]

I like the second one better.

I agree with others with your nice color choices. They work well.

I, too, would make the "T" in "The" lowercase.

Good job!

[herman]

Oh yeah, I forgot to change that after he said.