Fashion website i make

[Ryccio]

This is a website i just made : www.forbiddenfashion.com (http://www.forbiddenfashion.com) .
I hope you like the illustration, also :D

[Jackimalyn]

cute!

[xplod_ldg]

It's nice but I think it would be nicer with Arian font instead of Times....

[cmont]

The pictures on the right didnt load for me...

[cj2a]

The pictures on the right are broken for me as well, but the overall look and feel of the site is very cool. Nice colors, great illustration.

[tZ]

tables tables tables ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

I like the colors in your logo and the illustration are nice.

Everything else seems like it was just thrown on to be thrown on.

The color sceme doen't reflect that of your logo.

So I recommend making the colors some what mimic your logo becasue this is branding after all.

I think a predominatly white site using the colors of your logo for links and text would work nice. Instread of the block type of approach you have currently.

I would also recommend fixing your alignment on your left div(I mean dear I say word… table) and your right one as well. Whether its intentional or not it looks like a mistake on your part not a ingenious design decision.

The illustration is nice though. I would recommend making the illustrations your main artistic emphasis on page. Instead of the information/web design part. Keep it simple and to the point. You don't need ten different …tables with different colors in them to gain your audiences attention- the illustrations do that for you. So keep that in mind.

Oh… and your text on the right is expierencing design dificulties- contrast issues with the pink on brown background. I would suggest a easier to read combination of colors. Casue it hurts my eyes to try and read what that text says.

[cmont]

Dont likey the tables tZ? its ok... its ok... shhhh it'll all be fine!

[mac.FINN]

lol love the illustrations. Especially the first one with the uglygirls staring in disbelief of your Eva character.

But I agree the site doesn't really relate to your logo. The logo is light, pink and feathery; whereas the site is dark and heavy. The colours are nice - but the two designs seem at ends with each other.

[Kool]

I'm not sure if insulting and demeaning potential readers is a sound method or not in the fashion world :shrug: Maybe it is. Your text is full of english & grammar errors. I understand english is not your native language but you really need to have someone who is a native english speaker clean it up for you. I think the illustrations are great. http://home.comcast.net/~rnick9/koolsmiley.gif

[cmont]

I liked the way the text was, gave me a feeling like it was some hot foreign babe writting it all. I think thats pretty much the only thing that worked...

[Red Kittie Kat]

I do like the illustration and color choices but, the right hand images don't load and the left hand text is so small its hard for me to read.

I think I need glasses :D .... shhhh I didn't say that ;)

[reuber1]

I don't see any images off to the right either.

[WannaBrie]

I think the illustrations are great and the color choices work. But the thing that gets me is...how can you design a website in English without actually knowing the language, the syntax, the colloquialisms? Forgive me, but please, have someone translate for you if you don't speak the language you plan to design in. Also, I'm sorry, but the vapid content of this site is very Off-putting (dare i say, offensive to some?) I understand that u are trying to convey a "paris hilton" "I am the bomb, F**k U" idea, but this is just so nowhere...so empty. I am dissapointed that someone with talent would put this kind of cr**p out there.Normally I would not give such a harsh criticism, but the content of this site is just so vapid and negative...I can't help it. What is your point? Sorry, that's my 2...

[Noonan]

I'm going to give you what they call a compliment sandwhich.. First I'll say something nice, then something that needs improvement, then something nice to finish up.

ok, something nice... though you did use tables it's not a bad use of tables (though I'd reccomend learning css)

something to work on... you have smelly dog farts

ok, something nice again.... you look like snoopy and it makes me smile

[Compo]

I love the illustrations, you're talented there. Great colour scheme too.

The font isn't the one that I would have used. I think the site lends itself to a sans-serif font, but either way ... it looks great. Nice one.