webeffx logo please review

[greg23af]

hey guys... just need some feedback on this logo i've created...... trying to pick the best one that accurately shows an "E" in the middle.... for "WEB." I like the bottom 2 on the sheet of the 4.... feedback is good. thanks! link is http://www.linodesign.net/files/logosheet.gif

[KingVance]

imo the logo graphic and the type dont work well together

youve got kind of this cartoony thing going on with a very industrial type

[peder]

Sorry, I'm having a hard time seeing the E in any of them. The lines in the E look more like the holes in the B.

[greg23af]

yeah I can see what you mean... any suggestions to touch it up?

Thanks
G

[peder]

Maybe having the straight line in the B extend on the top and bottom, and then go out to the lines in the E? You would need to make it another colour or much bolder to let it be seen. It would make the E taller than the other letters, so it's just a suggestion.

[YNOT]

First off...what font is that being used?...it's very cool.

Second...I'm having trouble seeing any kind of 'E' in any of them. The graphic makes me think of a part of a hand holding 2 donuts. lol.

Could you make the 'W' flow into a lower case 'e' and then flow into a 'b'? I think the lines for and 'E' are just too confusing.

[greg23af]

the font is bauhaus medium if i recall correctly.... bauhaus light looks cool as well .... and thanks, never even considered a lowercase e.. it's more distinuishable than the uppercase.... check this out now..... http://www.linodesign.net/files/logosheet2.gif (http://www.linodesign.net/files/logosheet.gif)
comments? thanks.
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[greg23af]

oops... plug "logosheet2.gif" into there... forwhatever reason it didn't take it in the link.

thanks

[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

How about putting the "E" at the bottom of the "B"

[greg23af]

<a href="http://www.linodesign.net/files/logosheet3.gif">http://www.linodesign.net/files/logosheet3.gif</a>

[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

I meant the capital "E" at the bottom half of the "B"....the "E" would remain inside the "B" but you would see it better because it doesn't interfer with the "B"'s dividing line!......ummmm read signature if you are confused about what I just said.

[greg23af]

feedback?

thanks,
G

[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

What happened to the "B"...looks like a math equation!

[greg23af]

One of my buddies made a valid point... there's no point in having the B in there if the name is Web Effx.... seems more appropriate to use an E. I'm just wondering what else I can do with it.....

[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

ahhhhh I get it....e for effect.....makes sense!

[greg23af]

How about this one? Made the W all wavy to give it an "effect" .... better or worse than the other? :)

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[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

The wavy "W" doesn't do it for me...but it could work....I think the "e" is too far away from the "W".

[greg23af]

Please review with any comments - that would be great... the previous drafts I created didn't work I found... I'm just playing around with concepts. Thanks.

G

[peder]

You've got to consider the order we read in: top left to bottom right. Reading that we get "e W", which obviously is the wrong order.

How about taking some time to think about a concept for the logo, instead of rushing it with making many? Since you're only going to make one logo the final product, you definetely got to think quality over quantity.

[CamarotaDesign]

I like your first one, top right.

I think you could easily make people see the "E" if you made the "E" in your address below the same looking as the logo (using dashes) I personally like the logo, its simple and flows. Im not liking any of your new ones as much as the first one on the top right

[greg23af]

Hmmm valid points... thanks, how about this one? :)

[greg23af]

i didn't include "webeffx.com" at the bottom... but i'm mostly checking for the sake of the logo itself....

[greg23af]

Looking for some feedback...

http://www.webeffx.com

Thanks!

[greg23af]

Please check it out at ...

http://www.webeffx.com

Thanks!

[Chaotik]

Is it a common practice for a website to link to itself? :confused:

[budafist]

Is it a common practice for a website to link to itself? :confused:

Nope, it's weird.