Halloween!!

[Ally]

This is the first time I've ever been able to design something for Halloween, and quite frankly I had fun. Didn't seem much like work at all! Just want to share with you guys the outcome...and if theres any suggestions i'm more than happy to try them out =)

Front:

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/atijerina/HeavenHell.jpg

Back:

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a227/atijerina/HeavenHell-BACK.jpg

[SharkFinStudios]

Ally, great job as usual. Love the color and imagery you chose. Well done!

2 quick suggestions/comments. The owl on the back... you can't see his eyes and that is something that makes an owl so powerful. If you could make it so you could see his eyes I think that image would work much better. Right now it doesn't do much for me.

The other comment was on the date on the bottom right of the back. The kerning looks really tight. Might look better if it were evened/spaced out a little more to fill in more of that black space. I can see that on the front the date is a bit more to the left than on the back. That could be what is throwing me off.

All in all a fantastic piece. Sure do wish I got to stuff like THAT for work. ;)

Cheers!

[Ally]

Thanks Shark.

I hadn't noticed i had covered up the owl's eyes, and you have a very good point about the eyes being the strong aspect. I'll change it up to where they're visible. I also hadn't noticed I had adjusted the kerning on the back side for the date, will fix that as well!! Great tips, thanks again.

oh and btw, I'm sure you get descent work as well. Flyers are nearly at the bottom of the food chain (price wise) :/ !! But its ok because they're pretty darn fun.

[Samakimoto Graphics]

Very very very good piece.

[printmonger]

Not sure i associate owls with halloween, more like crows and bats. Love the front!

[jlknauff]

I like it but I think you should tweak the text on the back a bit. Normally I am opposed to justified text, but in most cases on this piece it would look better because the text is grouped 2 lines at a time that happen to be close to the same length. It just feels akward to me. Try justifying it and see how it looks.

Nice piece though!

[The Gloves of Death]

I think it's ultra strong. I think everything is working well together.