Back to Illustrator. (T-shirt)

[Tekk]

This is the first time i post any of my work on this forum. But since there is a bunch of VERY talented people here, i thought why not.

I havent played around with Illustrator for ages now since school takes to much of my time, but today was the big day i guess.
I tried something new for me, a t-shirt design.

So does it work for you? would you wear this? :D
Im having a really hard time with the typo, something seems out of place, maybe you could help me out here.

Thanks!

[Thorn_9]

Is the type on a path or manually placed? You need to kern the type. It looks oddly placed, so play with the anchorpoints on the path if the type is on a path.

The overall design looks good.

[Tekk]

You are right Torn, the type is on a path. Thanks for the reply. Any more comments would be awesome!

[Danger_Mouse]

I would like to see Cherry and the banners in more exciting display Rather than
just typed on a path. Would liven it up alot.

Quick example....

EDIT: obviously the example I put up isn't fine tuned to fit, more of a example of the shape. Something more flowing. Maybe extend the banners to the outside of the circle a tad too.

[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

I wouldn't wear it...but that is cause I am not a cherry kind of advertiser but my girlfriend liked it! The only problem I have with it is your font, font BG, and banner are not lined up at all....if they flowed together I think it would work.

[Tekk]

I see your point Danger M, will try that out.

[Riya]

They look a little more like grapes to me.

[mac.FINN]

I think it would look better if the graphic were smaller and higher on the shirt.

There are little tweaks here and there than are needed though:
The edges of the banners (where the words are) are cut square. have them follow the round edge of the circle.
Also , as mentioned, the was the words sit in the banners needs to be fixed. They sit rather awkwardly.
Good start.

[The Gloves of Death]

They look a little more like grapes to me.
yes I've never seen cherries on bunches like that..

is there any point to this design? what are cherry kisses? I'm actually very confused by this.....

[(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)]

[QUOTE=The Gloves of Death]yes I've never seen cherries on bunches like that..
QUOTE]

I guess grapes kisses would be a better name....:rolleyes:

[ijustliketodraw]

Hello everyone, I was reading some info’s here. I’m looking to design some t-shirts for my teen group at church and I wanted something similar to this, is there any specific program that will give sharp edges with details for such design. Check the picture or link below, If anyone can help me I will be very happyJ. Thank you
http://www.c28.com/uploadimages/guys_freedom_kh_frnt_popup(1)_popup.gif

[Danger_Mouse]

Looks like an Illustrator and photoshop job. But I do most everything in Illy.