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Zartan
07-24-2004, 05:47 AM
Yea...I had to go in the back of Wal-Mart and take pictures of chains and dumpsters for this one lol...worth it thou ^ ^

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Benjamin
07-24-2004, 03:21 PM
Nice.

I like the image of the chains and the colours you've used in the lettering.

Something bothering me a bit about the edges of the '4'? The 4 doesn't look quite like it blends with the chains. Could you try making it lighter?

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Zartan
07-24-2004, 04:35 PM
well it actually dose, it just has to be in CMYK with the full 4.75' .... theres also all this detail around the edges that u cant even see cause its scaled down ( eerrrrrr lol ) But I'll go back anyway and probably play around with that some more...thx ^ ^

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uncle carbunkle
07-24-2004, 06:09 PM
yeah, nice stuff!

i like the way the chain leads the eye a lot - it's got depth and motion. i agree with benjamin about the four though. for me, it's the shading maybe. ooo! or the perspective. yeah, i think that's it.

but well done! post again!

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snypa
07-24-2004, 07:24 PM
lookin good Z
not sure if it fits the style of music, but i'm sure you're more familiar with the artist than me. either way, i like it! nice color, too

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07-26-2004, 06:42 PM
Nice really nice man, I like it.

Silence04
07-26-2004, 06:52 PM
yeah, it looks really good. i like the photo of the chains!

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vision_d
07-26-2004, 07:01 PM
That looks really good, do you have anymore of your work?

sister
07-27-2004, 01:57 AM
that is really nice.

i think the '4' looks like it's floating, i'd put it on the red like behind the chains, sort of like that 'c'

ylaenna
07-27-2004, 02:13 AM
I love the colors and the perspective on the chains works really well to frame/highlight the title. I think the 4 looks a bit disembodied because of the light-colored outline around it. Also, the chains look just a bit fuzzier while the 4 looks really crisp, so they don't look like they are 100% in the same picture.

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symptic
07-27-2004, 06:42 AM
Quality work. It's subtle, but still attractive.