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fingerPrint.Design
12-20-2006, 07:32 PM
How are my retouching skills?
Before http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/5200/originalcopyrf9.th.jpg (http://img104.imageshack.us/my.php?image=originalcopyrf9.jpg) After http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4006/testflatpx3.th.jpg (http://img113.imageshack.us/my.php?image=testflatpx3.jpg)
RyanDigital
12-20-2006, 07:34 PM
im no retouch expert, but theres somthing about her face in the second one that makes me feel like its "too fake"
Mynock
12-20-2006, 07:41 PM
<borat voice> Niiiiiiiiiiiice </borat voice>
I see you added to bust. Very nice.
RyanDigital
12-20-2006, 07:44 PM
ah bust!, who cares about her face, the bust is what matters, A+
Jackimalyn
12-20-2006, 08:04 PM
i think its the teeth and the blush that make her look fake. better skin color tho, and nice job on the hair and eyebrows (which are also hair...)
mac.FINN
12-20-2006, 08:46 PM
no it's the face... It looks like you tried to airbrush it. Too much.
Apart from being a little flat (the colour, not the bust) the original was fine. The eyes and teeth are way too bright. I think you've bumped the contrast up a little too much.
(gra-ph!c-D'sig-nah)
12-20-2006, 08:50 PM
This looks like an advertising for toothpaste! I think this would work for a modeling agency, because over doing the doll look is sometimes welcomed.
CamarotaDesign
12-20-2006, 08:55 PM
yeah, the face is fake looking, lighten it up its too dark compared to her chest. Other than that, nice retouch
JaCkinbOx
12-20-2006, 09:27 PM
I suggest keeping the original wall color. The blush is too harsh -- looks airbrushy. You lost some of the detail of the hair in the transition.
Nice boobs.
Everything else looks fine.
Element_13
12-20-2006, 11:09 PM
I think you did a fairly nice job on the retouch. There are some spots I noticed besides the obvious that have already been commented on. On her arm on the left side, I can see a fat brush stroke that should not be there (almost in the shadow Her neck has lost the proper muscle structure. It looks too flat now. The collarbone on the left side is completly wrong in the retouch. The contrast of the blush and the wrinkles on her cheeks is what is making this piece look fake.
cornfed
12-21-2006, 03:04 AM
I'm surprised at all the nice boobs comments. I was thinking it looks like she fell asleep on a tea bag and it stained her cleavage.
Other than the blush issue, and the tea bag stain, I think you did a good job.