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dality
12-21-2006, 08:06 PM
Hi guys. Ok I am using my winter break to revamp all of my old projects for my portfolio before I go back for my last semester of school :( sad! Anyway I posted this one before but I slightly redid it and needed some new feedback.

It is a logo and a label for a fictional spice company and the labels would go on a clear glass bottle so that you would see the color of the spice through the bottle. Eventually I will actually put the label on the bottle but can you critique the design of the label as is? The spices listed on the bottom are all the different spices the company packages.

Old post http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=15257

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/6915/labelslogory7.jpg

MD
12-21-2006, 08:21 PM
New logo?

DesignerScott
12-21-2006, 08:56 PM
I definitely like the angled shaker, and one-color better, but I personally like the old cinnamon logo style, and seems like it would lend itself to a 'bottle' design better.
Not useful I know, but just input.

dality
12-21-2006, 09:40 PM
Hi designerscott thanks for the input!
I was still planning on using the other kind of logo but as a store sign maybe instead of a label. Here is the redo on that as well. What do you think?

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/3256/twoei2.jpg

DesignerScott
12-21-2006, 09:43 PM
Nope, I like the pouring out better. This seems to say "amazing spices go in the jar!" but the other says "amazing spices pour out.

Navian
12-21-2006, 09:55 PM
My question is, what are your containers going to be? small shakers? larger jars?

If they are small shakers, some of these may be too tall, or once you reduce the size, alot of the detail may be lost.

Samakimoto Graphics
12-22-2006, 06:03 AM
Yes, When you think of spice you see it pouring downwards, makes more sense that way.

Very good imagery though.

nele
12-22-2006, 10:00 PM
I do like it but the "real life" image blending into "clip art effect" doesn't do it for me.
Anyway the one on the right looks better