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@BLACC360
03-02-2007, 06:38 PM
been VERY busy of laterly so havent posted any of my stuff up. but im back.
this flyer is a work in progess for whore 4 house. tell me what u think and more importantly what i can do to improve the design.. all ideas well come.
smashmiester
03-03-2007, 01:28 AM
I'm diggin' the whole peach and black thing. Is 'Rampant' part of a logo or something because that font is not used anywhere else. Also I'd centre the text in the circle on the front like you did on the back. The woman on the back in the bottom left looks like she is missing an arm, I see why it is that way, based on what it was on the front, not sure how to resolve it yet- add some peach?
The white lines coming from the edges on the back should all be the same thickness.
Text looks good, but the image is too small for me to read it. Try bringing up the word on the 2nd line in security, that will give you more room top-bottom.
I likey though!!!!!
budafist
03-03-2007, 03:03 AM
I'm looking at a back and front right? Square design?
Did you do these illustrations? Love the bunnies! Panda bun is my favourite.
The back is super cluttered. Is there anything you can take out at all?
If you put the small print (tickets, attractions etc) into 2 columns, you may find you have more room to play with.
Exodus
03-03-2007, 02:50 PM
Could you host a bigger image on imageshack and link it? I'm having a little trouble trying to get the whole feel for it at such a small scale.
Drazan
03-03-2007, 06:01 PM
the tigra-bun it something that was done for Anderson consulting a few years ago.
http://www.spottycat.com/marlos/emporium/tiger/bunnytig.gif
I wish i could say more - but I'm still a bit dead yet. It has good elements.
Very cool collage of imagery. Love the tiger-striped rabbit...
CamarotaDesign
03-04-2007, 08:29 AM
nice work, fits it's genre very well.