one of my favorites...

[anderson]

this is one I did for an acoustic night at MOMS (midwest original music showcase), it's quite "poppy" and a little bit "emo."

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i149/ando3000/Posters/MOMS.jpg

[balou]

Are you asking for critique Anderson?

[anderson]

Are you asking for critique Anderson?

If you want... I'm basically just showing some of my work and what you all think about it.

[mac.FINN]

Nothing really seems to fit together to me.
The type treatment is hard and edgy;
the flowers are very flat are brush like;
the bird is similar to the flowers, but more cartoony;
the hearts are smooth and plain;
the umbrella is detailed and colourful, but has wierd blotchy edges and a malformed handle.

I like the concept, but you don't really have a clear direction.

[budafist]

The M.O.M logo doesn't fit with the design. If you can't change the logo, design so that the rest fits.

If you made the border jagged like the logo, as well as little jagged hearts, then it could work.

I don't like the colour choices either. If you're not sure of colour, you should work out some swatches first and go from there. black, red, pink, bright yellow, brown and 2 kinds of blue? No.

Check colourlovers (http://www.colourlovers.com/) for some ideas if you are stuck.

[fredrich]

Just a general comment; remove the picture in your signature, it's annoying as I always tend to see it as being part of the work you post.

[anderson]

The M.O.M logo doesn't fit with the design. If you can't change the logo, design so that the rest fits.

If you made the border jagged like the logo, as well as little jagged hearts, then it could work.

I don't like the colour choices either. If you're not sure of colour, you should work out some swatches first and go from there. black, red, pink, bright yellow, brown and 2 kinds of blue? No.

Check colourlovers (http://www.colourlovers.com/) for some ideas if you are stuck.

thanks.