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anderson
03-19-2007, 01:32 PM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i149/ando3000/Posters/dgar-0413.jpg
SpugNothuson
03-19-2007, 01:44 PM
I like the winged meat. It disturbs me a little, which I like.
The blue, green and white is messing with my eyes, I get the feeling that was indended though. It could just be my rapidly deteriating eye sight though. :eek:
falldowngoboom
03-19-2007, 05:25 PM
nice... the only thing that I'd fix is the tip of the wing where the corner doesn't go, either round it or extend the miter limit.
Mynock
03-19-2007, 08:14 PM
nice... the only thing that I'd fix is the tip of the wing where the corner doesn't go, either round it or extend the miter limit.Exactly. Attention to detail is important. Something wrong like this stands out more then the overall composition.
MikeTheVike
03-19-2007, 08:32 PM
I like it! I did notice the wing tips, looks like it might have been intentional since the other feathers have a straight edge...
Love the flying meat...never seen that combo together. Good job (but my vote is to fix the miter on the wings, too). Maybe even make the outline on the wings uneven like it is on the meat.
falldowngoboom
03-19-2007, 11:17 PM
I like it! I did notice the wing tips, looks like it might have been intentional since the other feathers have a straight edge...
That's what I was thinking when I saw the lower feathers, but it looks fine on those as far as I'm concerned, but on the very tip it just doesn't work for me.
vtwin_gary
03-19-2007, 11:21 PM
i like the ovarall thought of the winged t-bone but it looks like 2 different pieces. the wings are nice and orderly but the meat is not it has nicely done thick & thin lines. i think they should be the same on the wings. the text in the background is next to impossible to read so if it is needed verbage then it needs to be addressed.
budafist
03-20-2007, 06:00 AM
I like it too. Methinks it should be pork...when pigs fly...
1ooScreamingTrees
03-20-2007, 09:34 AM
Nice illustration - like others have mentioned, the contours of the wings could stand to be more simmilar to those of the t-bone.
It took me forever to figure out what this says, though. Why is it repeated twice in the background? The 2nd "L" in Osullivans is so obliterated that it makes the word illegible.
anderson
03-20-2007, 03:21 PM
I like the winged meat. It disturbs me a little, which I like.
The blue, green and white is messing with my eyes, I get the feeling that was indended though. It could just be my rapidly deteriating eye sight though. :eek:
It's your eyes. And now I have some cheesy 80's love song stuck in my head.
nice... the only thing that I'd fix is the tip of the wing where the corner doesn't go, either round it or extend the miter limit.
Fixed. Thanks for the suggestion.
i like the ovarall thought of the winged t-bone but it looks like 2 different pieces. the wings are nice and orderly but the meat is not it has nicely done thick & thin lines. i think they should be the same on the wings. the text in the background is next to impossible to read so if it is needed verbage then it needs to be addressed.
The background verbage is just to add "something" to the background.
I like it too. Methinks it should be pork...when pigs fly...
His nick name is "Beef Jr." so the pork wouldn't work.
Nice illustration - like others have mentioned, the contours of the wings could stand to be more simmilar to those of the t-bone.
It took me forever to figure out what this says, though. Why is it repeated twice in the background? The 2nd "L" in Osullivans is so obliterated that it makes the word illegible.
Thanks I'll take that into consideration.
I've fixed the wings but don't feel like uploading a new picture. Thanks for the cruitique yall.
Silence04
03-20-2007, 03:55 PM
i think you need to introduce black somewhere else in the design, right now it seems top heavy...
Maybe put a black boarder around the whole thing or maybe a black drop shadow on your white copy.
G Designz
03-23-2007, 05:21 AM
interesting
This must be your greatest poster, eva!
mac.FINN
03-23-2007, 01:46 PM
possibly the greatest poster, evar!
Mynock
03-23-2007, 02:02 PM
Maybe not greatest, but definitely top 10.
1ooScreamingTrees
03-23-2007, 02:26 PM
The background verbage is just to add "something" to the background.
whoa whoa whoa someone call the design police. this should never be a justification for an element in a piece of design work.
mac.FINN
03-23-2007, 03:14 PM
Maybe not greatest, but definitely top 10.
No no Mynock, just admit it. This is the greatest poster ever!
Mynock
03-23-2007, 03:15 PM
No no Mynock, just admit it. This is the greatest poster ever!Let's compromise top 5?
mac.FINN
03-23-2007, 03:50 PM
ok ok...
Definatley one of the top five best posters of all time.
Mynock
03-23-2007, 04:02 PM
I'm glad we could come to an compromise on this one. It's been eating at me all day.
morea
03-23-2007, 04:03 PM
Beefy!
Mynock
03-23-2007, 04:03 PM
Beefy!and wingy don't forget wingy!
morea
03-23-2007, 04:04 PM
hey, is that where buffalo wings come from?
*drool*
anderson
03-24-2007, 08:04 PM
yes.