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jv1122
06-04-2007, 06:42 PM
Hi there, I'm new here. Recently I've been learning some new stuff on my own. I was wondering if you can give me sime constructive criticism on something I just made. =D. I'm mainly wondering how the graphics look. Also, the message will soon be text, I don't know why I made it an image. Thanks!
http://sdcc13.ucsd.edu/~javazque/saactest (http://sdcc13.ucsd.edu/%7Ejavazque/saactest)
http://home.comcast.net/~rnick9/movingtruck.jpg
Moved to the Showcase Forum. :)
CkretAjint
06-04-2007, 10:01 PM
I enjoy the direction you are heading... On my screen it looks fairly washed out though.
lattequeen
06-04-2007, 10:53 PM
The logo is done really well and I can see where you are going with the colors. The logo is so big, though, that it took me a while to notice there was text in the blue area.
mac.FINN
06-05-2007, 05:35 PM
lol SAAC.... saaaaaaack.
Yeah I'm immature, so what?
John G
06-05-2007, 06:03 PM
Copperplate Gothic on the non-SAAC part = yuck imo. All caps, and the serifs cause confusion.
at 1600x1200 resolution your body copy sits right next to your banner. Looks... funny. Not sure how typewriter font goes with SAAC though.
Ben Kessler
06-05-2007, 08:30 PM
Be sure to center your text...
looks like somthing is missing.
Like walking into a conversation without knowing what its about.
Also, in regards to the typography there is no reason for a rag. All the lines are close to the same length and given some tracking and kerning modifications could easily be justified which would promably make the page look a tad more sophisticated. Allthough, the type shouldn't be an image anyway but, thats another story.