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Jackimalyn
06-11-2007, 05:18 PM
Just wondering what you guys thought. I used to have the placement of the type on the right, does it look like its in the middle of nowhere on the left? thanks everyone...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j139/jackimalyn/crisi_prev.jpg
flutterby nut
06-11-2007, 05:45 PM
meh...the whole piece is in the middle of nowhere...sorry...
i just think there needs to be a clear 'call to action'...what do you want people to do with this piece?
who's your target market?...what crises does the prevention line handle?...mental health?...stressed out, overwhelmed parents?...teens?...i can't tell...
the imagery should speak to your target...get them to say to themselves, "that's me there in that pic"...get them to save that number so they can reference it in the moment of crisis...the 'call to action'...
this doesn't really speak to anybody per se, and is more likely to be added to the recycling...
Ben Kessler
06-11-2007, 05:48 PM
I like the simplicity of the blank face with the teardrop. I do agree with most of Flutterby's comments, though.
CkretAjint
06-11-2007, 05:57 PM
Holy huge lips, batman...
Agree with other as well.
Jackimalyn
06-11-2007, 05:58 PM
the point of the piece as it was described to me was that they wanted to educate people that there is a number you can call if you need to. The content is on the back, the front is jus there to catch their attention, not describe the center. They'll turn it over if it applies to them. You make a lot of good points though, I'll re-evaluate