Self Promotion Postcard

[cgmpowers]

I'd welcome any comments regarding a self promotional mailer I am sending out. This is directed to small businesses who I've already once sent out a mailer too. Its a followup mailer to local small businesses (under 50 employees).

Chris Powers

PbD Postcard 2 (http://cgmp.org/pbdmailer2.pdf)

[*the girl* ryan]

:D
the color is definately noticable, nice work. I think I am just turned off by the typography in 'It’s paramount to how it’s perceived by current and potential customers.' i think it's a combination of the font and the justification. I would tighten that up if you have time

[cgmpowers]

I changed the the two bottom sentences...I think its a little better now.,

Thanks
Chris

:D
the color is definately noticable, nice work. I think I am just turned off by the typography in 'It’s paramount to how it’s perceived by current and potential customers.' i think it's a combination of the font and the justification. I would tighten that up if you have time