New logo needs critiquing

[JaCkinbOx]

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t191/contemporaneous/logos/voodoo01.png

Invented logo for a fictitious beverage. Not everything translated as well from my sketch to vector as I'd hoped. But then again, it rarely does.

Not sure I'm very keen on the effect on the V. I think I'll ditch it.

[Ben Kessler]

It looks cool, but what's the concept? Are those spider webs connecting the letters? I'm not sure what that has to do with voodoo.

[steve2112]

i am not getting the voodoo relation to the logo. Maybe if the lines that make up the V were like chicken legs or something spooky like that. Besides that i do not think the logo needs to get darker as you move to the right. I like the shapes and stuff though i would wrap it to a soda can or bottle and see how it looks and work from there maybe. Or take it back a step and rework a little in just black and white. Maybe, depending on how you want to portray the product have some other 'voodoo' elements woorked in or around the logo on the can. Its easy to do quick mock ups in 3d in illy.

steve

[kevincdg]

I like it. But I think how effective it'd be would depend on what the actual beverage was. How does a beverage relate to spider webs?

But, assuming there was a connection between everything, I like it. :)

[Mynock]

The counters need to be filled with the webs too, not just pitch black.

[budafist]

I like it but I feel like you should give it a bit more detail. Try giving the letters a few cracks or some woodgrain detailing.

I like the overalapping letters but I do feel like they are too "squished" loosen the kerning just a tiny bit.

[hewligan]

I'd say definitely loose the effect on the V - it just doesn't fit.