Music Festival.

[Mbesuma]

HI, I made this for ermm nothing really, just something I can put In a portfolio (hopefully):) I did make it in A4 size but I think that would be too big to post :rolleyes: so I shrunk it. Any advice from you people would be very helpful!:cool:

http://www.imagehosted.net/img/musicjpg932d8eeb.jpg (http://www.imagehosted.net/#musicjpg932d8eeb.jpg)

[captain spanky]

looks pretty cool/trendy. :)

[PrintDriver]

Unless it's a postcard, it might not be legible. As a poster on a wall, you'd have to walk right up to it to read what you're advertising. Isn't the object to get people to the gig?

[martyng]

It's good. Rather unreadable though, you have to concentrate too hard to understand it.

[John G]

Vstretch the font 110-120% imo. Looks squished.

[Tea]

It got my attention! I like it. Listen to the experts though on the readability issue.

[MikeTheVike]

I like the art, but its too hard to read

[Virgo Nightingale]

The artwork is great, but all of the typographical elements need to be much bigger so they can be more legible. I would also flip the word festival so it can be more easily read. My eye went to the largest word on the flyer to figure out what this was for, and it's upside down.

[cornfed]

I agree. I like the design, but its way too hard to read. I had to look way too hard for the date. I actually went back and looked for it. I was about to post that I thought you forgot to put it cause it's so hard to read.

[captain spanky]

I find it ok to read... but maybe that's just how my brain works... I'm not very linear. :)