Recent Flyer

[emmerse]

I'm a member of a event production company (we throw "raves" if you will, but we hate that word) and we have thrown a series of successful valentine's parties branded as Naughty Valentine's Ball. We're now launching an halloween annual as well: Wicked. So this is the flyer for the first of hopefully many. The logo is my own creation (well, dafont.com plus a few customizations) plus a lot of the copy I wrote as well. So far, we've been getting a lot of good comments about the look - even my wife's super Morman boss likes the flyer, so that's gotta say something. Now I submit it to the pros...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r93/emmerse/Wicked_frontMS.jpg

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r93/emmerse/Wicked_backMS.jpg

[GraphixNPrint]

I did not view the images larger than posted... with that said; the taranchula (??spelling) looks/is fake - filled with black...

fix that and it is IMO a good layout and design from the web view

[martyng]

I would never read that much text on a flyer. Looks nice though. I agree about the spider, make it look more real.

[carolyn]

the right half of the flyer is crisp and has nice contrast, but the left side looks dull and washed out.

[martyng]

^That's just the look/style of the jeans, I think it would look silly if blacked out

[carolyn]

i don't think they should be blacked out, i think they (along with the spider) should have a little more contrast.

[emmerse]

huh, I never event noticed that about the spider. I did a lot of color tweaking to get the right look for her while also trying to make the printer happy. Guess the spider slipped through the cracks in the process. thanks for the comments

[budafist]

Agreeing about how the left of the front side looks greyed out. But other than that I like it.

The amount of text on the back is overwhelming. I certainly wouldn't read it. It looks like you have tried to fill every available space. Try shrinking some of the headings, tighting up the leading and give the piece a chance to breathe.