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razuel
11-07-2007, 03:31 PM
I'm updating an old web site and have run into a slight bump. I need to stick to this basic layout and style because it's just an update, now a whole new project. But when I look at this current page I'm getting an awkward feel. My attention goes straight to the bright green bar in the middle, but I really like that bar at the same time. Does it look weird to you guys or am I just crazy? Any suggestions?

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/3135/greentest1ws5.th.jpg (http://img85.imageshack.us/my.php?image=greentest1ws5.jpg)

dirt lover
11-10-2007, 02:52 AM
I'm overly drawn to that too. Some of that bright green put in the top may balance it.

Two-Toe Tom
11-10-2007, 02:58 AM
at first glance, the woman looks like she has no pupils and is possessed, is that what you were going for?

razuel
11-10-2007, 03:31 AM
Really? I got more of a magical vibe to it. I was going for more of a fantasy feel.

dirt lover
11-10-2007, 08:13 AM
Maybe you can photoshop a slight pupil on her.