Dontcha

[kliss]

what y'all think of this flyer?

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9541/donflyer2kb5.jpg

[GraphixNPrint]

Sweet design.. I dont read French though.

I don't like the right opacity on the arm and knee, it looks TOO PSed to me... I think I would bring the arm to the front and have the artwork behind them.

[CkretAjint]

Pretty darn snazzy. Is there a back side to this flyer?

My only gripe is your "©" seems raised slightly, like it isn't on the same base line as the rest of the copyright information. I would add the year as well, make it "©2008 klissarov productions". But that is just presonal preference :)

[vtwin_gary]

i like it. i agree with gnp about his arm. can some one translate it?

[Jackimalyn]

OMG its a mix between VinDiesel and Moby!

[Typically]

MoDiesel!

pretty cool design easy to read and you get the info without having to look at it too long. i agree with the others about the grungy stuff on his arm and the © placement.

[kliss]

okay thanks for the advices & comments. i'll try them out.
but althought now that i check it out.. i see it lost a lot of quality compared to the orignial copy.. might be because of the upload host.

no there isn't any back side to the flyer. it simply announces his "street single" or something similar.. less than an album like a cd with only a few tracks. not sure how you call it in english.

and the green part actually says: my rap comes from the nord side 93.
if you're curious, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seine-Saint-Denis

[Typically]

EP (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Extended_play) is what it would be in the english

[Riya]

The line going through his forehead bothers me.

[vtwin_gary]

who else wants to sing the pussycat dolls when they read the thread title?

Dont cha wish your girlfriend was hot like me
Dont cha wish your girlfriend was a freak like me
Dont cha, dont cha

if you didn't before, ii bet you do now, dont cha?

[Typically]

damn you gary!

[Mynock]

MoDiesel has a stripe going through his head. You might want to fix that. Other that that it's ok.

[budafist]

who else wants to sing the pussycat dolls when they read the thread title?

Dont cha wish your girlfriend was hot like me
Dont cha wish your girlfriend was a freak like me
Dont cha, dont cha

if you didn't before, ii bet you do now, dont cha?

I did. Still do. Hate that song.

[garricks]

A guy dressed in a harem costume tried to sing it during the American Idol auditions last week.

He was stopped at the first "was" and escorted from the room.

[Tea]

Nice work!

[kliss]

thanks for the comments, i edited a few details.. does it look better?

http://aycu30.webshots.com/image/40189/2001343617200759465_rs.jpg

[garricks]

I like it! I showed a couple of coworkers, and they thought it was great.

...the © symbol still looks a little high to me, though. It looks to be halfway between on the baseline and superscripted.

[GraphixNPrint]

Looks much better... but if the date is Jan 21, 2008 your a day late ;)

[vtwin_gary]

no good reason for this post i just wanted everyone to have that damn song in there head.

happy friday! it is friday, right?