Rotor Fest 2004

[sectachrome]

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Rotor Fest is a large car show consisting of rotary engine cars. The guy wants me to take out the 04 and just put 2004 underneath Rotor Fest, butI like it there http://graphicdesignforum.com/emoticons/icon_confused.gif

[xosteve]

try it anyway....i'm also not digging the '04 in the corner...also try making the cars somewhat bigger and use a layer style to stroke the letters so it's more anti-aliased than the blurry stroke you have right now.


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i like it .....except for the cars are floating....maybe darken the drop shadow? dont know must think hmmm must eat <dough>

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[L o g o s]

I like it....but I agree with steve use stroke on those letters...

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Ok, this is a forum and you asked so I will give some design advice...hope you don't mind: Since the whole point is the cars with rotary engines that should be your focal point. Right now there is no focal point...the words down below are blurry and hard to read and the words on top get lost and the 04 is unnecessary.

So, If it were me, I would make the cars much larger, in fact fill the frame and crop some of the cars out...less of a stroke...on things like this it is imperative that you be able to clearly read the words.

You have all the elements, they just could use a little rearranging. Oh, and raise up the words rotor fest so they are not part of the line. Good luck...

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[sectachrome]

thanks for the constructive criticism guys! http://graphicdesignforum.com/emoticons/happy.gif
what do you think now?

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[vectorgfxqueen]

Much, much better, but I am still seeing one big car cropped in somehow...you want the cars to catch your eye first, then the rotor fest and 2004, then the bottom words. Are you doing this in photoshop?

If it is too much trouble, this is still lots better than before.

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I like it except for the cars floating in the air. Maybe you can make the background color change into a horizon behind the cars and use light to dark to give it depth.

Pretty good job, keep it up!

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