Please Critique my landing page

[silver93350]

Please Critique me

First, I am not sure if this is the right category to place this ad….sorry.
Anyway this is a landing page that I have created….let me know if you like or even ift or if you hate it. All comments will be appreciated. Also, does anyone know what would be a reasonable price to charge for 1 landing page??? I was thinking $XXX-$XXX of the top of my head but then again I don’t know….

Here it is:

http://www.deaddogdesigns.net/Wealthy%20Affiliate/index.html

I really don’t know how I feel about it, right now :)

[Fredonia2k]

Can't talk about money here.

As for the page, the colors look good, but I don't like that the page is a mile long.

[silver93350]

ok, yeah there is alot of content that has to go on it, so I have to force it on there :(

sorry didn't know about the money question

[DesignStudio]

Silver, it's not that we can't talk about money, but we can't suggest or disclose specific prices or charges legally because it's technically price fixing within the industry. There are good answers to general questions about how to charge within the forum, and some links as well to places that might have answers or how to figure it out. I'd try doing a search, someone posted a good article about a week ago about how to figure your hourly rate, but I can't remember who.

[Fredonia2k]

It seems to me that a landing page should be a page and not so long. It should really be getting the viewer interested in what else there is to see.

The first two blocks seem like a tremendous waste of space. Hundreds of vertical pixels for two sentences.

[shalom_m]

silver93350,

Sorry I could not resit this one.
No hard feekings I hope.
http://mandelbaumonline.net/csspop/landing.jpg


Just put it in the right perspective and change the name to LANDING STRIP.

You may want to add some blinking lights?!?!

[Fredonia2k]

silver93350,

Sorry I could not resit this one.
No hard feekings I hope.



Just put it in the right perspective and change the name to LANDING STRIP.

You may want to add some blinking lights?!?!

Haha. I thought you were going for a pyramid scheme. Either is funny, I suppose. :)

[urstwile]

You could greatly reduce the length of the page by reducing the space between things. As it is now, there's lots of extra vertical space that doesn't add anything to the readability.

[RageDesignGroup]

Not bad. Have you thought about using CSS? It may help with optimization. Would the client let you bring the images down and do column layout to make it not have to scroll so much?

Please Critique me

First, I am not sure if this is the right category to place this ad….sorry.
Anyway this is a landing page that I have created….let me know if you like or even ift or if you hate it. All comments will be appreciated. Also, does anyone know what would be a reasonable price to charge for 1 landing page??? I was thinking $XXX-$XXX of the top of my head but then again I don’t know….

Here it is:

http://www.deaddogdesigns.net/Wealthy%20Affiliate/index.html

I really don’t know how I feel about it, right now :)

[Rooster]

jebus..i feel sorry for anyone who has to look at that with a res size smaller then huge. theres no reason why you cant fit ALL of that content onto a very small page.

[Neballer]

Damnit! I just set my resolution to huge.

You want people to join this, Wealthy Affiliate - and you want them to do it TODAY! The type of people you are going to suck in with this (if any) are going to have microscopic attention spans. You need to have your design punch them in the face right away. That way they'll have signed up before the stars and tweety birds stop circling their head.

[noantsinmypants]

without saying the same things others have about the length, Round the corners on the image of benjamin's. Or else square up the green on its above. Too conlicting to me. They need to be cohesive with each other.