Extreme Adventures: Website

[chardos]

Hey Guys,

I'm new to the forums. I came here to look at peoples work and the critiques that the more advanced posters give. The members on this board seem quite knowledgable so I thought this would be a good place to get a critique from myself.

This is a design for a non-existent business, I created it for practice and to develop my eye.

http://chard.predder.net/folio_images/web/extreme.jpg

I'd love to hear what you guys think.


Rich.

[romancing_layouts]

Nice work, the title photo has great flow, the lines lead the eye accross the image nicely.

I only have two suggestions:

1. the halos around the main logo and the skier seem too bright and a little distracting, I would just lower the opacity.

2. The skiers suit is too close to the sky colour, I think changing it to a nice orange or red would really make him pop and an easier/quicker read.

...all that said, Im still very impressed, keep up the good work.