Critique My Site

[INDY GS]

Looking for some feedback on my site, it's been up for a while now, but I am looking to do a few changes over time. I don't really know what right now, but I do have the free time at the moment.

Any ideas?

http://bolderdesignstudio.com

[simplicity]

Your full justified text is creating rivers. Left justify it or it needs to be corrected.

[chetan]

Need to work on text.










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[nicholaspaul]

I can give you more than five words ...
Great design - very clean, clear, easy to navigate, beautiful colours, sharp graphics. Love it!
It looks like you've been working on the text issues, but it can still do with more separation of headers, subheaders, etc. Play with some creative typography and it will all look killer.

[INDY GS]

Thanks for your replies so far. I have played a bit with the text. And will continue to do so as time permits. I fortunately had TWO projects fall in my lap yesterday, so these hands are not as Idle as I thought.

Any comments on the work in the portfolio. and if anyone can give me an idea why my installation of Lightbox (on the portfolio page) works on Safari, Firefox and IE on my mac, but on Firefox on my wifes PC laptop does not work. It fails fairly gracefully, but is not what I intended to happen.

Thanks.

INDY

[WannaBrie]

I like the site and you have some nice work there, but I don't like the fact that every single logo you have in your portfolio has that "reflection" thing going on. Makes them all look to similar and web 2.0. Also, i wish you put a link instead of an image of the websites in your portfolio as the images are kinda small and I'd like to see what you did with the nav, etc...Otherwise, nice though, bright colorful nice lines, clean design.

[Two-Toe Tom]

it looks great! your lightbox works fine on my firefox (on a pc). it could be that the page wasn't fully loaded when you click the links? i kinda wish you had the 'next' and 'prev' links for the lightbox, it's a bit tedious closing the lightbox and clicking on the next piece each time.

i agree with the reflections being a bit distracting. for your logos, i think your strongest ones are erin evans, parcel pak, cline chiropractic and trueblood & graham.

for the websites, i agree with the images being too small. maybe you could try cropping out the browser areas so you just see the content area, and make that bigger.

overall, very nice work!

[INDY GS]

I will drop the reflections, as I wasn't sure of them in the first place. I will look into the next buttons on the display of the lightbox graphics, I agree that it is tedious to click back and forth all the time. That is a priority now. As well as making the website images bigger with click thru to the actual site.

Thanks for the feedback everyone.