Pinnacle Marketing Firm Identity

[wango]

Greetings, fellow citizens of earth!

Here's the latest identity im working on, they were pretty particular as to what they wanted:

-Must be triangular

-Must have a "P" in the center of said triangle

-Must have Marketing, Promotions & Consulting encasing the outside of the triangle http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/emoticons/dry.gif - (This request I intentionally neglected)

-Restricted to two colors - one of which must be black

-Must have more cowbell!

Anyway let me know what you think thus far -and perhaps, if time allots - the solutions tothe World's expendable energy dependance.





***VWANGA FOR PRESIDENT***
***ZARTAN FOR VICE PRESIDENT***
2004 - Forever!

First America -Then The World!

"Were not asking for your vote people,were pancaking demanding it!"

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Post Edited (vwanga) : 10/11/2004 4:50:57 PM GMT

[morea]

Simple and effective. I like your choice of text and your extra cowbell. Nice job!

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[snypa]

looks good to me. the only suggestion i'd make would be to use the same font, whatever it might be, for the "p" and the word "pinnacle"

also a small stroke around the p might separate it from the triangle a little

cowbells make everything better!!!




...and remember, tuesday is soylent green day

[wango]

Thanks Morea, I was worried I put to many [cowbells] in there. I feel better now that you approve.

And - I hear ya snypa, but the effect of the 'P' inside of the triangle was intentional. I wanted give the perception of it being part of the triangle symbol, yet still independently viewable.


***VWANGA FOR PRESIDENT***
***ZARTAN FOR VICE PRESIDENT***
2004 - Forever!

First America -Then The World!

"Were not asking for your vote people,were pancaking demanding it!"

************

[snypa]

oh, ok.
i wasn't sure if you considered that

...and remember, tuesday is soylent green day

Something about the arrow just don't look good. Also the font to me doesn't match. I like the color but the grey text on the bottom doesn't match either. Boy I'm on a roll here.

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[Benjamin]

You might want to put one in with what they requested - the 3 words around the outside. I agree with you, but sometime clients can get funny.

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[DJofTexas]

i think the black line around the triangle and inner shape should be a lil thinner





personally i like your political ad the best:
***VWANGA FOR PRESIDENT***
***ZARTAN FOR VICE PRESIDENT***
2004 - Forever!

First America -Then The World!

"Were not asking for your vote people,were pancaking demanding it!"


i am voting foryourguys.
bush and kerry can just go rot in hell.

[40thCentDesign]

Looks clean and nice to me!





http://snlibc.jt.org/Cowbell.gif

[3howards]

i think i'd like it better without that pattern at the top of the triangle, i think it's overkilll on a simple triangle. it doesn't add to the concept and distracts from the p. i agree with snypa that you should use the font on the p in pinnacle. that would create some continuity. i would also change the font for the grey text to something similar to the main font but toned down. i like the color, but i'd like to see it in b&w to see how effective the concept really is.

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[MpiricL]

off topic but I love the 'need more cow bell' pic! 40

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