Concert Flyers

[MpiricL]

*removed pics, more to come later, thanks for all the comments :) *






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Post Edited (MpiricL) : 10/19/2004 2:50:49 PM GMT

[Silence04]

i like them both, you did a good job!

suggestions:
the only thing i don't like about the top one is the yellow text, it is just a little too bright and i think the hue is slightly off from being in 'harmony' with the other colors. (if that makes sense)
for the second one, i think the image is way too dark, makes that whole area/background seem really flat.

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[ReedHendrix]

I really like the second one (definitely my favourite), the type works great but agree that it needs more contrast.

I feel the typography on the first one needs some work doing to it (it seems scattered about). Also the high contrast has created a slight bitty effect.

[ikyut]

i like the first one, the second is ok, but the tipography games on first one are really cool.

ikyut.

[Benjamin]

They're good, but I think the band could look more engaging or cool. The way they're chatting with each other looks a bit lame, like they're not relating to the outside world. Good posters though.

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[MpiricL]

Thank you all for the critiques!

No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist. ~Oscar Wilde