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Silence04
10-15-2004, 08:17 PM
god, i need a drink. only a few more hours until the weekend!
but they just threw 'another' adat us atthe last second.
SO, do you guys like any of these? anything usable or should i start over... http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/emoticons/violent.gif
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D-Zine
10-15-2004, 08:24 PM
Silence...yer good dude!

I like #3 the best. I don't like all the boxes in 1 and 2. #3 is simple, clean...and says it all.

I go with #3! Nice work. HOORAY for the weekend!

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MpiricL
10-15-2004, 08:26 PM
Agree, #3 is the most appealing, and I say that with an odd feeling because of the sexy girl in the bikini from #1.
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Fixion
10-15-2004, 08:41 PM
the color boxes of # 1 and 2 just look flat. The third box's color has dimension with the slight gradient.
I vote for #3

Benjamin
10-15-2004, 08:46 PM
#3, although I like the girl too. The gray in #1 doesn't work.

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Silence04
10-15-2004, 09:20 PM
cool thanks guys... :)

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40thCentDesign
10-15-2004, 09:42 PM
I like the bottles better than the ads. The bottles look exciting and new, but the ads look kinda... well, not unique enough to complement the bottles.

You did the bottle design, right? So why not throw some of that pizazz in the ads? I think it would work well.


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defjoe
10-15-2004, 09:53 PM
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defjoe
10-15-2004, 09:54 PM
BTW silence, I saw some of your bottles at the gym the other day. VERY nice in person. Great job.

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Silence04
10-15-2004, 09:59 PM
40th:
yeah, i designed the package too.
thats a good point though. the ads are way too classy for the bottles. if they weren't due within the next hour, i would have probably done that. :(
oh well, theres always next time.




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Silence04
10-15-2004, 10:05 PM
WHAT!?!?!?! i haven't even seen any of my stuff in the stores before!!
thats great joe! :D

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Eraser Nubbin
10-15-2004, 10:09 PM
I like no. three as well, and am also having some mixed feelings about not picking no. 1

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10-15-2004, 10:38 PM
Number TREA!

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ikyut
10-15-2004, 10:59 PM
numba 3 is the coolest very good job.

Number one is cool too, reason is the good photo and correct exposure of the green palmera and the sand at the background, of course.

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oasis
10-16-2004, 01:31 AM
#3 isn't too classy for the packaging. It adds a contrast. The surrounding area is very plain and simple and it draws your eye to the bottles.

#1 looks kind of cheesy. The design is good but the picture is so cliche, it seams like i've seen that girl many times before. Generic. Go with #3.

Neuro
10-16-2004, 02:08 AM
3 - simple!




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uncle carbunkle
10-16-2004, 02:36 AM
i want to squirt the girl in #1 with the bottle from #3. little minx.

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Silence04
10-16-2004, 04:24 AM
lol@uncle!

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Brui
10-16-2004, 07:33 PM
Great layouts! but i will work on the colors to make them look more summer/hot ...tannish looking http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/emoticons/wink.gif

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