My Wedding invitation

[ikyut]

Check this two invitations i made for my wedding and tell me what do you think.

One is formal and the other is more abstract and less formal.

Thx in advance.

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[Fixion]

The second one is WAY better. the first one has a microsoft word / clipart feel to it

[morea]

Congratulations on your upcoming wedding! I like both, but I prefer the more formal look.

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[defjoe]

second one is a little hard to read but I agree with Fixion, the fist one is very clip art.

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[ikyut]

Thanks for all sugestions...i some way i agree with everybody, andmy opinion is this one, when the invitation is formal is more close to be a template, and yes maybe is flawless, but i think that is finest when is more white,and the books says that when is more white, morefinest or important is the wedding.However i think the pink vectors one is better, because is more nice and complex too, but maybe this is not the correct opportunity to use it.
So now i will continue working to reachtheinvitation based on the first one, uhhh.
i really hope you undestand. and i will show you some pictures after the wedding.


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[flashlight]

Congratulations ikyut. I really like both the invitations. They're such a contrast of styles. I like the typography on the first - it's sophisticated enough to make it non-clip art for me (but then I get all excited about fonts).

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[ikyut]

Thanks Flashlight and Morea about the congratulations...

I´m very happy about it...http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/emoticons/specool.gif

ikyut

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[ikyut]

A stage two is avialable the gray will be silver ans the envelop (it´s correct, the thing that carry the invitation) will be blue like the tipography.

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Tell me what you think, i will print it soon

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Envio editado por (ikyut) : 10/19/2004 3:03:32 PM GMT

[coconut]

Very sweet. Very good job. Congratulations. I think the text would look nice in black
I think the boarder would look good in silver
i think the whole thing would look nice as foloows:
all black printed on parchment or watercolor paper with torn edges. Formal and professional.


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[Silence04]

i like the 2nd one from the first post... love how it flows!! :D

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[jamodu]

yeah - i really liked the second one. gorgeous 'waves'!

[ikyut]

Ilike it too, the atmosphere is more interesting,but(we) decided to make the formal one.
And one of the reason is: the blue envelop will have a lacre on silverwith our initials (lacre: old way to seal de envelop made bya candle,sorry about myuncompleted englishvocabulary) that match better to the formal one.
And most of the ormaments on the wedding at church and party are on blue.I tried the second on blue but do´nt like it.
Coco i will try in black too before the print.

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ikyut

[morea]

ikyut... you mean a wax seal on the envelope? with an image imprinted in the wax? I bet that will be beautiful!

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[Jason Fraker]

The correct answer here is this: Use whichever one your fiancee likes. Girls plan their weddings from the time they're 5, and the only part that's interchangable is the man standing next to them. I went with the one I liked a little less than the other because my wife liked it better. Believe me, no matter how important this day is to you, it's WAY more important to her.

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[coconut]

that made me giggle jf, it's true


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[ikyut]

Jason Fraker said...
The correct answer here is this: Use whichever one your fiancee likes. Girls plan their weddings from the time they're 5, and the only part that's interchangable is the man standing next to them. I went with the one I liked a little less than the other because my wife liked it better. Believe me, no matter how important this day is to you, it's WAY more important to her.

-Jason



Those are the exactly words inside my head, Jason

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[ikyut]

morea said...
ikyut... you mean a wax seal on the envelope? with an image imprinted in the wax? I bet that will be beautiful!



Thanks Morea,a silverwax sealon the blue envelopewith our initials (JL) imprinted.

Iwill show photoswhen the job will be finished.

ikyut.

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Fixion said...
The second one is WAY better. the first one has a microsoft word / clipart feel to it

I agree