Site Critique Please

[noantsinmypants]

http://www.jeremywisecup.com/MesaWeb07_08/about.html


Could you give me your opinions please? I feel its lacking something. This is one a of few websites i have done, so i'm not far experienced.

thanks.

[jibble]

well...I've been "away" for a while and web design is one of my favorite's (thats not saying im good at it:P)

I will say this. Construction sites NEVER look extravagant, so it's a good project for starter-outers. Looks wise I would say it works. Clean, simple, to the point. For the client i would say it's about all they would need. Like I said I have yet to come across a construction/contractor site that blows me away.

Overall, good job! I would like to see more pictures, pictures, and more pictures. These guys sound like great builders, but what does their stuff look like? Also, play around with that type. These guys around here will tell you the same thing. Type in it of itself is an artform. Type alone can drastically change any project in the click of a button!

[steve2112]

If building stuff is there job i would have some much larger pictures happening. It almost looks like a graphic designer's site. I would try to put more of what the company does on it while keeping the sleek look you have already done.

steve