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Guffy
07-20-2008, 06:41 AM
If you would like to see all of my art go to my deviant page;

http://guffyart.deviantart.com (http://guffyart.deviantart.com/)

Heres one of my pieces using 3D Max;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v318/guffy/Xylia3.jpg

PrintDriver
07-20-2008, 10:17 AM
Even for worm's-eye perspective, she has very big feet and very long legs.
Not that there is anything wrong with long legs. :)
It's cool though.

SM.
07-21-2008, 12:43 AM
are them brown swooshes meant to be her hair? coz at the mo you cnt tell. ?? and the legs are too long, unless your giving it a characterisation.

NTLemon
07-21-2008, 01:04 AM
Great work. Far beyond my capabilities in 3d. I understand it's stylized but even then the legs and feet might be a bit over long. Also for the hair you could stand to have it intertwined a bit more instead of the separate clumps. Otherwise very cool, looks a lot like one of those plastic figurines.

a_muse
07-21-2008, 01:34 AM
As a designer, I can see what the others are saying above.

As an artist- I really love it, I think the abstractions add to the overall mood and feel of the piece. You don't necessarily need to know if the brown swooshes are hair, a weapon or a creature about to attack from behind her. The over emphasized feet and shoes suggest what they may be used for if you dare to cross her. She's cool.

Although as a woman I am bothered a bit by the shoes (not by the sexual aspect of them). I am morally against high heels. :p

Randomhero
07-21-2008, 03:43 AM
I am morally against high heels. :p

I hear they are good for your posture :rolleyes: .

a_muse
07-21-2008, 02:46 PM
Uh huh :rolleyes:

budafist
07-21-2008, 11:22 PM
They're good for making you look taller and keeping the bottom of your pants dry when it's raining. I consider my high heels like gumboots for rainy weather.

Interesting angle to pick for the character. Makes her seem way bigger I guess. Epic.

Danger_Mouse
07-21-2008, 11:36 PM
I think the warp perspective works here. I don't think the image would be as impressive without that sort of distorted cartoon style. One thing about these 3d programs is that most of them all have that same plastic look. It's the different styles that help stand it out.

Nice work.

Red Kittie Kat
07-22-2008, 02:14 AM
^^ exactly ... I was thinking that too .. really looks like some of the nicer anime I've seen over the years :)

spendthrift
07-22-2008, 10:20 AM
Uh huh :rolleyes:
If the high-heels can talk, they should have complained you being tortured with weight more than it should. :)

budafist
07-22-2008, 10:20 PM
I wear heels on occasion. It makes me feel tall...er.

spendthrift
07-23-2008, 03:34 AM
I used to wear boot, but not now as I feel that I have enough tall. :)

a_muse
07-23-2008, 03:45 AM
Ya, I do like the height they give, but I don't like to have to suffer for beauty ;)
I'm not that graceful in them, I'm likely to sprain an ankle, ballet flats are my favorite if I have to wear something fancier then sandals.

plokivos
07-23-2008, 05:28 AM
i like it.

Higher Ground
07-23-2008, 01:50 PM
I think that this is a really good image. Wish I was capable of something like this in 3D!

However, I do agree with the perspective comments...... Although I do agree, that a view from below adds to the authority of the character, I do think that this particular execution makes the character look like a size zero with size 11 shoes.

Higher Ground

spendthrift
07-24-2008, 03:45 AM
Ya, I do like the height they give, but I don't like to have to suffer for beauty ;)

I doubt those fit wearing it the high heels would make them suffered, they may feel missing something without it. :)

urstwile
07-24-2008, 04:01 AM
I actually know a couple of women who can't go barefoot anymore, their calves are so compressed from wearing high heels most of the time it hurts too much for them to wear anything less than a couple of inch heels.

a_muse
07-24-2008, 04:07 AM
That is so sad!
Their bodies have been permenently altered for the sake of fashion :(

Red Kittie Kat
07-24-2008, 04:10 AM
... and their toes are deformed too I bet .. the big toe premanently at a sharp angle toward the toes.

Guffy
07-25-2008, 08:35 AM
Hello everyone,

I've read all your comments thanks for the great reviews.

The past few days I've been working on a piece.

And now It's finished;

Here it is.

http://guffyart.deviantart.com/art/The-Look-92647840

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v318/guffy/Look.jpg

John G
07-25-2008, 11:13 AM
crop the bottom fourth of it off and vary the lengths of the eyelashes (post render'd be fine) and I'd say you've got a winner (yes the eyelashes are varied, but they're all varied the same length/width/angle pretty much).

The way you've got it cropped now, the face looks too long (you're expecting the end curve on the nose, but it's cut off right at the point that it looks like it's going to continue on down a ways) (well, plus the cheek structure should be a bit more rounded where it meets the nose).

Could also experiment with a tad bit more spec on the cheek only. Damn fine skin texture though.

Very nice work.