Feedback Required For The Visiting Card Design

[vishnutejd]

Hi Friends I have just tried out a new design for one of my clients. He is a Transporter and have got strong presence in my city. He wanted me to try something new i have come out with a design which looks like a tyre and the visiting card shape would be a circle the dimensions which i gave was 2.5" 2.5". How viable would it be to present this design any ideas are welcome.Expecting a quick reply as i need to submit him the work in the next 12 hrs

http://www.flickr.com/photos/23989079@N07/2717827372/

[acousticmind]

I'm not too sure what you mean by visiting card...

but - I like the look, although, it doesn't look like a tire to me... it looks more like a ship's steering thing.... the impact typeface distorted like that just screams "NO" to me as well. But, that's just me, don't like to see distorted typefaces (and I think impact is over-used)

[CkretAjint]

Looks like a carriage wheel to me. Wheres the contact information?

[Typically]

not really feeling it. whats the gray between the white dashes? speaking of the dashes they aren't all the same size. i'd go with caps for the outer words and a different font

[vtwin_gary]

i agree with the distored text, it would look better it the text was on a path rather than warped. i would try all caps in a bit of a thinner font.
also looks like a ships steering wheel to me.
will the center areas be cut out or is it on white card stock?
is a visiting card like a business card? i've also heard it called a calling card.

[John G]

no no squishy bad text

and is the wagon wheel a good way to portray a transport company?

[vishnutejd]

Thanks guys for your feedback.....i am working on it ....it is a business card which would be shaped in that way...the contact information would be behind the card...

[vishnutejd]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/23989079@N07/2717944364/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/23989079@N07/2717957850/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/23989079@N07/2717957930/

[Randomhero]

You should try and get all the spokes evenly spaced. Also the squares should probably line up with the bottom of the spokes, otherwise it looks a little scattered.

[Typically]

what happened to the other one?

[vishnutejd]

Typically i am working on the first one...

[Randomhero]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/23989079@N07/2717944364/

The house icon is ridiculously overdone. It looks like you tried to put a door there in the front, but it's way too big and honestly I don't like the way the house is done at all. It makes the B look skewed. Im also not feeling the red and grey. "Homes & Infrastructures" gets lost in the red background. I do like the text for "Urban" it fits very well.

All in all you might want to make a few more concepts before you go with the final one.