2pg Spread Mag Ad...

[Silence04]

the client didn't give much copy to work with. so i made up for it by adding a super hot chick...hehe.
too bad i couldn't leave inher g-string that she was originally wearing! :P
what do you guys think?
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[D-Zine]

That's pretty hot Silence! The AD I mean!!!! Sheese you guys! Always got one thing on yer mind!!

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Seriously...I think the ad looks great! I love the simplicity. Great work!!

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[coconut]

ah, that is fantastic! You did perfect by adding the girl as the main focus. Then they will want to search for what made her so pretty! Oh it is the tan and that is what i need to use to get this look. That's what I read into it.


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[MpiricL]

yeah, I like it alot! Did you add more to the bathing suit, since she was wearing a g-string? If so, great job. Where did you get that photo?

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[Silence04]

thanks guys.
MpiricL, i added her bikini bottom. i also took out her legs and the rest of the raft to make here bootie pop out even more..lol
we bought the photo from an online store like gettyimages, i can't remember which one.

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[coconut]

naughty, but smart


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[Bear]

looks good silence, the copy at the bottom, on the left doesn't sit right, almost too much spacing to the sides and not enough above and below. also the strapline (no pun intended!) 'respectable, classy, highend', was that your own addition or theirs ? it doesn't really flow very nicely and it's not the way i'd describe a tanning lotion.

nice work on the bum-job, maybe you should consider surgery to compliment your design skills.

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[Silence04]

Ollie Lindsey,
hmm, i actually liked the placement of the copy on the left.. but as for 'respectable...' that was thier idea, i didnt have a say in that.

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[Nina]

It looks very good, I like that the picture gets you attention right away
I just don't know why you picked such a hard font to go with a very sensual picture
As for the strapline I know they gave it to you but it seems like they are talking about a piece of equipment or a car


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[morea]

It does look really good. I never would have realized how much work you did on the photo if you had not explained it!

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[Tyger]

silence, great job man....it's one of those ads where you could get away with using a beautiful lady in a swim suit.....nowadays it's overkill but in this case, perfect.

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[D-Frag]

awesome job, you never cease to amaze me

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[Benjamin]

I like the bit on the right best. Especially the reflections of the bottles. Very nice.
The strap line is not good.

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[coconut]

For the market, it's perfect


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