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silver93350
08-01-2008, 02:40 AM
I have spent some time creating a review style type landing page. This is my first one, and I was hoping to get some design feedback from it. I would like to know what you like about my landing page as well as what you don't like.
I am 23 years old and this is apart of my affiliate marketing campaign. I hope to draw some sizable amount of income out of my affiliate marketing stuff as school is very costly and I hope this will allow me to pay my way through school.
I am starting to get a full arsenal of SEO experience as well as improving my web skills.
I really enjoy web design and hope to get better at it as time progresses. Anyways, here is my landing page:
Losing Weight Fast (http://www.bestqualityproducts.net/Losing-Weight-Fast.html)
Thanks,
Garen
silver93350
08-01-2008, 11:56 AM
the only thing i don't like about it is the how i rate the products. i think it needs a graphic instead of the 4.9/5 stars
Mr_LeE
08-01-2008, 04:52 PM
Very Bland. But to the point.
Maybe work with some more layout styles / positions of your paragraphs on the page, it might make it more interesting to read.
Lee
silver93350
08-01-2008, 05:30 PM
ok thank you for the feedback, do you have any layouts you could suggest that look more appealing?
xc-runner
08-03-2008, 02:50 AM
Your meta keywords aren't comma seperated...might not make a difference but I think they need to be.
silver93350
08-03-2008, 03:04 AM
ok thanks for the heads up I will make changes
THANKS!
silver93350
08-03-2008, 05:19 PM
any other comments about the web sites design. Like it, love it, HATE IT?
I'm leaning more towards hate. The outdated markup and bland design aren't working for me.
silver93350
08-04-2008, 03:29 AM
I don't believe it is bland. I didn't want to invoke the feeling of "in your face." It is a simple review style landing page. Do you not like the color choices or what? Could you please elaborate on why you HATE it?
Do you have any suggestions for making a more attractive review style landing page?
redneckrodney
08-04-2008, 04:29 AM
I am by no means a web designer, but I do think before you publish you need to do some proofreading. Grammar errors can make a site not so attractive. From an inexperienced point of view, the design looks ok to me.
aaron123
08-06-2008, 04:26 AM
not too bad,clearly enough,i like it!
dr.gabemirkin
09-22-2008, 09:18 PM
Remember these points for a review style page.
Clean
3-5 offers to be reviewed
Place the reviews first, then the content. (Some people do it the other way around… But I found it best to put the reviews first).
Always include a blurp about the site
Add multiple links to the offer. (the image is clickable, the visit site is clickable, and the visit link is clickable. Then at the bottom there are the sites again.)
Place the offer you want to convert in the #2 spot (again… I found this is the spot most chosen.).View more information Click Here :- *link removed*
SurfPark
09-22-2008, 11:26 PM
I don't know if I like it. The obvious clip art header is a big turn off for me. It makes it look like you're a spam site and I'm just going to be giving you my email addressed to be spammed.
"Losing Weight Fast | Doesn't have to be Hard"
If I had a dime for every time I heard that one... Seriously, if your site's objective is to review online weight loss plans, then you need to have some more critical reviews.
"What astonishes us is that there isn’t a need to count your calories, or killing yourself in the gym isn’t required in order to achieve weight loss."
You SEO snake oil salesmen, oh I mean affiliates, will never stop will you?