Logo design for new record label

[lokki]

Hi

I have just finished designing this logo for a new record label...

See what you think...

[WannaBrie]

I would like to see it without the arrows, they seem unnecessary.

[lokki]

arrows were a request from the label...lol

[CkretAjint]

It's kinda hard to read. How does it read when reduced down to the size of a dime??

[Typically]

its a little hard to read with the cables crossing over the text so much. if you are going to put that black outline around the whole logo make it all the same stroke. there is a little black point above the o in audio that look out of place. i think you are going to have a hard time printing this at small sizes. when this logo is on a album artwork it is usually pretty small like 3/4" wide. you have to keep that in mind when doing something like this. also how does it look in one color? i think you have some more work to do but it's on its way.

[CkretAjint]

Another thing I just noticed is that the whole logo has a nice 3D effect to it, and is very lively.... except the plug ends. They are quite flat and not exciting.

[Typically]

Another thing I just noticed is that the whole logo has a nice 3D effect to it, and is very lively.... except the plug ends. They are quite flat and not exciting.

i thought that too. maybe extend the black outline to the cable ends too. it would make it look like it's on top of the arrows not just part of it.

[rstetz]

something im having a problem with is that everything from the text to the tails of the arrows are round and curvey. then you have these really SHARP arrows, maybe try rounded them off a little to go along with the rest of the logo. I also agree that the lines going through the text make the text hard to read.

[lokki]

Good points cheers...

I think ill sort the stroke out. I will keep the arrows sharp as this adds a nice contrast to the roundness of the rest of the design...

the label arte really happy with it i just wanted to run it past you lot to see if anything was spotted like the stroke bizzle ..

Ta very much peeps

[double A-ron]

I too, would like to see how it looks in one color. I'm guessing if it's hard to read as it is, it's going to be even harder as a one color piece.

[Craig B]

It's kinda hard to read. How does it read when reduced down to the size of a dime??

I second that, at smaller sizes this would be most likely difficult to read.

[budafist]

The stroke makes it really hard to read. Strokes often make bold fonts easier to read but with a dainty script font it does the opposite.

[arame]

I too found the text is made a little unclear with the white cables on top of the white lettering.

Also, both the arrowheads and the cable ends are pointing away from the company name - nothing seems to be diverting the viewer's attention towards the important info - who they are.

[holycow77]

it hurts my eyes.

[Thijsjanssen]

can u make it in black and white...
If it works then, it works also in color.
If not, there is some work to do.

I think it's to messy for a logo.
Hard to read, and not realy recognizable.
The arows are messing it up...