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Sierra
08-08-2008, 03:25 PM
Hi all!,
I'm working on a small card that is to be handed out at a tradeshow and I was hoping anyone could critique this? I'm not a designer by any means so I understand if my layout would upset those of you who are designers with talent and experience:) I just need a little help with obvious faux pas...
Thank you!!:)
(The Green block on bottom is contact info)
ashleyJACKskyla
08-08-2008, 03:46 PM
i think that it is simple and it is nice for a business...
cornfed
08-08-2008, 04:07 PM
Looks clean. The only thing I would do is align the text at the top to the text on the bottom so your margins are consistent. I would also align ebm-pabst inc.... with the line separating the contact info from the logo or align it to the logo. I'm a stickler for the swiss grid, though. I can't tell if the address is properly aligned because its covered, but if its not, then I'd align it, too.
longboy
08-08-2008, 04:07 PM
I think my only problem with it is the font used for the web URL. I'd rather see it consistent with the oblique font noting the booth number :)
It's a nice, clean-looking piece.
Randomhero
08-08-2008, 07:20 PM
I like the design a lot but there are a few things I might change. The text is pretty small. If that is the actual size of the card it might be hard to read for a lot of people. Also the card size is pretty irregular (providing that is actual size). It won't fit in any wallets or card holders.
Other than that I like the layout, good job.
dwagener
08-08-2008, 07:47 PM
For not being a designer I think that it's really good. The alignment's only thing I have a problem with too.
Sierra
08-08-2008, 09:29 PM
Thank you all for your help and suggestions - after correcting the alignment, margins, and type style for the url - it all came together very nicely and I'm happy with it now. You guys are awesome!:)
budafist
08-10-2008, 08:59 AM
Not bad at all.