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Zerk
08-08-2008, 08:52 PM
Ok, so normally I dont mess around with print stuff and I am looking to start doing some freelance stuff. I have a few cards done and am just looking for extra opinions.

http://5ifthdoor.com/misc/bizCard/pdfs/
Totally open for any criticism as I would rather have it now then after I get these printed.

Thanks!
CkretAjint
08-08-2008, 08:58 PM
Can you please post JPGs?

Thanks! :)
Zerk
08-08-2008, 09:08 PM
Doh, I forgot to put the source file up. Cant do it right now I will later. Sorry thanks for trying to look!
Zerk
08-08-2008, 09:50 PM
Here they are!
http://5ifthdoor.com/misc/bizCard/jpg/zw_card_line_bankGothic.jpg

http://5ifthdoor.com/misc/bizCard/jpg/zw_card_tb_bankGothic.jpg

http://5ifthdoor.com/misc/bizCard/jpg/zw_card_line_eurostar.jpg

http://5ifthdoor.com/misc/bizCard/jpg/zw_card_tb_eurostar.jpg
budafist
08-10-2008, 09:02 AM
Experiment with more varied compositions.

These designs are very tiny variations of each other. It's like having a cheeseburger and arranging the ingredients in a slightly different order; when you should be trying some different new ingredients.

I thought you might appreciate the food analogy ;)
Thijsjanssen
08-10-2008, 12:10 PM
sorry but i'm not getting a hard ....
It's a little bit doll, you have to try to make it a little more attractive.
And about the typography (the info, phone, mail). Make it a little smaller.

and like budafist sad: varied compositions.
Goodluck with it.
Zerk
08-11-2008, 04:04 PM
Mmmm, cheeseburger. I can haz?

Cool thanks. I took away the words from the ZW and grouped them with the rest of the info.Felt it was too scattered. I had a few other variations I had gone through before, but I ended up with these two.

Thanks for the input!